Raindeer

Ooh! The first things that stood out to me was the length (lengthy, but not too long that I'm antsy and anxious to finish) and your title. A Bloody Path ...

Hello there :) So this was a nice, lovely read! I have some suggestions, though. 1) Tell your readers what exactly the civil service exams are. Based on this story, ...

Hi! This is going to be a short review... But anyways, let's get started, shall we? Basically, the main thing that came rushing into my head first was the pace ...

Okay. Woah. So my first two thoughts: Info dump and super meaty paragraphs that need to be split up . Okay, first. Info dump. Already, the first paragraph we get: ...

Hi :) This is a nice little story you have here - I had some recommendations though. First - it's not really clear. Is it time travel, or a dream? ...

This is simply beautiful. The detail, imagery, and description in this is fantastically written. The only things that bothered (you could say) me were... remind me of a lamplight that's ...

Hiya. Wow, I love how at the beginning everything was terrifying, then in the middle it became sweet, and by the end it was all sad. The first thing I ...

Hi! First, might I suggest to put a rating for 12+ and violence on here? Just a suggestion with the death scene. Okay, so the actual review. You did a ...

Hi, there. So, this is a little confusing. Is the story of all these people talking in her diary? When does her diary entry end? It doesn't really make sense, ...

Hi, there. First let me start off with that you obviously did your research and got a couple facts in here. Well done. I remember in school some time studying ...

Wow. I have to say, this was spectacular. I love the idea of using seasons as characters! Your description of the forest was also beautifully written, and I love the ...

Hello :) I'm here for a quick review. So, first off, I want to say that your tenses are a little scattered and messed up. Be sure to stay in ...

Hi, there. I'm here to give you a review. First, I just wanted to say this reminds me a lot of the series the Unwanteds. But the plot seems smooth ...

Hi, there. Let me dive in. *coughs* Okay, so this is simple but so very relatable this is killing me. It's one of those things where everyone can feel like ...

Hi, I'm here to give you a short review. First, I just wanted to say you do include quite a lot of facts in your story. You need to spread ...