Raindeer

Hiya! Ooh, nice poem. I'm going to critique it line by line, then sum up everything. Okie dokie, here we go. Shadows persuading me to take their side Good sense ...

Hi! I'm here for a short review today! Okay, so first things first, what's the title referring too? I didnmt see any reference in the chapter to do with time... ...

Hi, there! I noticed this already has a on of reviews on it, but I'm one review away from my third star (gasp) and this seemed interesting. :D So here ...

Hello! Sorry for the comment below, I accidently pressed the 'submit' button (it happens to me a lot>.

Hello! Ah, wonderful haikus! I love them because they're so full of imagery, and they're so splendid. I'll take this haiku by haiku. Haiku 1 Standing on a field This ...

Ooh, exciting chapter! Ahem. Hello! So, yes, this was a very exciting chapter, and we got to know more about Chad (who actually doesn't seem too bad...) However, I honestly ...

Hi! As Esca has mentioned below, there are quote a few typos and punctuation errors, so before you submit it to the Literary Journal, remember to fix them. As always, ...

Hi! Rain here for a review. :) Soo, I'm just going to take this sorta step-by-step. 1) When Bryan just barges [not really barges, but comes] into her room - ...

Hi! I'm here for a quick review. So, just a few nitpicks to start this off: and it is just the first Hmm... I think you meant 'and it is ...

Heyy! Wow, yes, I agree with you - very fast-paced, very sassy. It gives it a nice tone, especially when you're addressing to people who aren't nice. This is so ...

Hi, Kevin! Eternal back for a review on this series! :D Oh, and happy review day! Let's get started.. It's more of a grammatical error - but one that still ...

Hi! Well, I'll have to agree with the reviewers below, this was quite... Different. But a good-different kind of way. First things first: rhyming. Rhyming in some poems is good. ...

Hello! Ooh, so we have more description, more imagery in this chapter. Fantastic! Wow. 0.0 Deep ending there. It was nicely written, though! I haven't said this yet, but I ...

Hi, again! Happy Review Day (if I have not celebrated this wit you, yet:D) So. Just a pointer - the whole first half of the chapter, all the lines/paragraphs started ...

Hi, there! Happy Review Day. Sorry, I haven't read the first part, so pardon me if I accidently touch upon something that has happened/been done in the previous part. So! ...