Raindeer

Ooh! That was a little... Hmm? How could I say it? Cruel? Evil? The setting up towards the end was amazing. The beautiful imagery was so detailed and straight to ...

Oh my goodness, this was so sweet! I thought it was amazing that you wrote such a kind poem about your mom - plus, this would make the perfect Mother's ...

Oooh, this was bone-chilling! It was splendidly written though. Your imagery of the dissection (I'll call it that :P) was amazingly written. I could imagine almost all of it in ...

Oh, interesting. This is an awesome topic to write about, I wish I was in your English class. Haha. ^_^ I see the date is April 12 - so I ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! I have to say I haven't read your previous chapters, but this has been stuck in the Green Room. So. I want to start this out ...

Hello! Here for a review from team Stitch - Happy Review Day! A HUGE congratulations to you for finishing your novel. May I ask, is it your first completed one? ...

Hi! First of all, I wouldn't suggest posting a summary up here. Why? Because it costs you points - points you so preciously earned, and you spend them. Sure, it's ...

Hi! I'm just here for a short review. Trey is defiantly different though, *definitely So, first of all, I really think this should be genre-ized as "essay", not short story. ...

Ooh! This is really interesting. It's sad but beautifully written. Your imagery was fairly OK - though a little more would be amazing. I want to know where she is, ...

Hiya!! I haven't read your first chapter, so if I get something wrong or anything like that, it's because I haven't read the previous chapter. So this was interesting! I'm ...

Hi there! I love how different this is, and you include all aspects of our world. Awesome. :) Mostly, I'm just going to go stanza by stanza (or at least ...

Hi there! Wow, what a powerful poem! This is a really strong message about a really strong topic - and I'm so sorry your friend was cyber bullied. I'm glad ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS ^_^ This was very interesting! When I first saw the title, I thought it was going to be those unoriginal, boring poetry/lyrics of "Mirror mirror, on ...

Hello! Ooh, this was an interesting piece. It was a very refreshing read, with a different feel to it. I liked it a lot. First, nitpicks! My mother knew that ...

Hello again! So, agreed with the reviewers below me: the repetition of 'that light I see' just doesn't work. As I mentioned in my previous review, repetition is fabulous is ...