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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: AFRAID TO...

    Hiya! Let me introduce myself to you, I'm Crystal and I'm gonna review this wonderful, not reviewed work of yours! Here's what I thought: Okay, I got confused already! In ...

    Nov 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Alone

    Crystal here! Reviewing for you tonight! ;) This is what I thought. If I answer my own questions I'm writing this as I read it so please have that in ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Telling the Truth

    Hiya! Crystal here with a review for you! ;) Okay so first I wanted to say the one problem I had with this poem. The only thing I found even ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Misty Mountain

    Hi! Crystal here! This is my review for you! ;) The tree Whispers silently; There was only one mistake here, you capitalized the 'W' in whispers but it was in ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Look into her eyes

    Hiya! My name is CrystalPony21 and I reviewed your work, Here is what I thought of it. This doesn't make sense at all: "Her age beyond her years," age and ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: To See You Leave

    Hi, my name is CrystalPony21 and I reviewed your work so... here's what I thought I guess! First this part didn't make sense: "You got the closest anyone will ever ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Love

    Hi! I guess I'm gonna review this now so... My name is CrystalPony21 and this poem caught my eye from the Literary Room. Please take these suggestions to heart! Amazing ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Where in the world?

    Hello! Nice to meet you I'm Crystal and will be reviewing one of your work now! Let me say it's beautiful and amazing from the start! OK! This is a ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To Live

    Hi, I hope you don't mind if I review this, oh bye the way my name is Crystal! Nice to meet you! Amazing poem the poem really does explain it's ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: The Day I Made Everyone Hate Me

    Hi, I'm CrystalPony but most people call me Crystal or simply Pony, I'm reviewing your work now kay? Wow, there isn't much to review, I don't hate you though and ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Nugatory

    Um... Hi I guess My name is CrystalPony but you can call me anything you like! I'll be reviewing you now! Amazing poem but I don't understand the meaning of ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: rippling

    Its a little long and drags on but over all its a great poem! You have a way with words as they flow together to make your pieces and not ...

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where the Sun Goes Down

    Epic bro! This site continues to amaze me and you help that happen! This piece you wrote was very well written you have all the right words and I never ...

    Sep 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wandering

    This is a little long but great job, your choice of words really spoke your mind and your spelling/ grammar is perfect! I enjoyed your poem, keep writing it's worth ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: My First Love

    This was a wonderful poem about your first love, It's everything you said it was, Lyrical, and Romantic. But it's also very sad or dramatic in a sense for the ...

    Sep 15, 2013


We are not to simply bandage the wounds of victims beneath the wheels of injustice, we are to drive a spoke into the wheel itself.
— Dietrich Bonhoeffer