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RainbowPowerPonies

  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Really funny...

    Hi um.. I just have a little criticism on this poem Now,to make it flow better you could have said: Prison is instead of: Prison's contractions don't usually fit but ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Other Side of Mars

    Hi, RPP here. Showin you what I thought of this: Here it goes!! The title REALLY fits the poem which is good. Most people struggle with that. My favorite line(s) ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Short stories unpublished

    Hi, I'm RainbowPowerPonies and I'm here to review this for you! Here's what I thought of it :D Okay so I actually really liked this work in all, I didn't ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: New Rooms

    Hello, It is review day and I, PonyzandPokez am here to review this um... poem (kinda long one if you ask me :p) Here is what I thought of it: ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My First Poem

    Heyo! Welcome! This is NOT your first poem ever right? Just on YWS right? Cause if not AMAZING oh um, I forgot to introduce myself I am PonyzandPokez and I ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Spagettifacation!!!

    Hello, I'm PonyzandPokez, I'm reviewing this poem of yours about spaghetti? It sounded strange so I gave it a shot. Here's what I thought of it.: "Floating THREW TIMELESS space ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I never liked my hands

    Hello, my name is PonyzandPokez and I am going to review this poem of yours because it looks good. Here is what I thought of it: This is a great ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Time.

    Heyo! PonyzandPokez here to review your poem about time. Here's what I thought of it!: okay, first correction, you rhymed rushed with rushed and that's not right, it's not excepted. ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Running

    Hey!This is what I thought of your totally AMAZING poem aww sorry, dead give away! YES! AMAZING! okay, this is a little depresing but its GOOD! I have to say ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Warmth

    PonyzandPokez, heard you wanted a review on this in chat so I just hopped on over to get started! Here is what I thought of it! Wonderful Poem! Here come ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Dead (Climbing Rhyme)

    I LOVE IT! Oh, PonyzandPokez ^.^ You know me. I'm just here reviewing your spectacular poem! Here's what I thought!!!!! Spelling: %100 Grammar: %95 Emotion: %80 Overall: %95 This was ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Loneliness

    Okay, here we go, oh by the way PonyzandPokez here to review your poem! Here's what I thought! Spelling: %100 Grammar: %100 Emotion:%45 Overall: %81 Sorry about the harsh emotion ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Yesterday, Today & Forever

    Hi, PonyzandPokez here to review your very fabulous poem! Here's what I thought, Spelling: %100 Grammar: %95 Emotion: %75 I love the fact that you have superb rhyming and I ...

    Apr 7, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Fantasy Re: A Guide To Making A Seriously Powerful Voodoo Doll

    Hiya! Reviewing time! Interesting topic and I'd actually like to find out if it works or not! Now who could I use it on *glances around* YOU *points to random ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Where the Wild Dove Sings

    Hiya! Review Day Review Mode Activated! Okay, wonderful! Im not even gonna rate this but if i had too it'd get a 100000000000000000000 out of 100. See what I mean? ...

    Mar 30, 2014


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