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Re: Really funny...
Hi um.. I just have a little criticism on this poem Now,to make it flow better you could have said: Prison is instead of: Prison's contractions don't usually fit but ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Other Side of Mars
Hi, RPP here. Showin you what I thought of this: Here it goes!! The title REALLY fits the poem which is good. Most people struggle with that. My favorite line(s) ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Short stories unpublished
Hi, I'm RainbowPowerPonies and I'm here to review this for you! Here's what I thought of it :D Okay so I actually really liked this work in all, I didn't ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: New Rooms
Hello, It is review day and I, PonyzandPokez am here to review this um... poem (kinda long one if you ask me :p) Here is what I thought of it: ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: My First Poem
Heyo! Welcome! This is NOT your first poem ever right? Just on YWS right? Cause if not AMAZING oh um, I forgot to introduce myself I am PonyzandPokez and I ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Spagettifacation!!!
Hello, I'm PonyzandPokez, I'm reviewing this poem of yours about spaghetti? It sounded strange so I gave it a shot. Here's what I thought of it.: "Floating THREW TIMELESS space ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: I never liked my hands
Hello, my name is PonyzandPokez and I am going to review this poem of yours because it looks good. Here is what I thought of it: This is a great ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Time.
Heyo! PonyzandPokez here to review your poem about time. Here's what I thought of it!: okay, first correction, you rhymed rushed with rushed and that's not right, it's not excepted. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Running
Hey!This is what I thought of your totally AMAZING poem aww sorry, dead give away! YES! AMAZING! okay, this is a little depresing but its GOOD! I have to say ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Warmth
PonyzandPokez, heard you wanted a review on this in chat so I just hopped on over to get started! Here is what I thought of it! Wonderful Poem! Here come ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Dead (Climbing Rhyme)
I LOVE IT! Oh, PonyzandPokez ^.^ You know me. I'm just here reviewing your spectacular poem! Here's what I thought!!!!! Spelling: %100 Grammar: %95 Emotion: %80 Overall: %95 This was ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Loneliness
Okay, here we go, oh by the way PonyzandPokez here to review your poem! Here's what I thought! Spelling: %100 Grammar: %100 Emotion:%45 Overall: %81 Sorry about the harsh emotion ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Yesterday, Today & Forever
Hi, PonyzandPokez here to review your very fabulous poem! Here's what I thought, Spelling: %100 Grammar: %95 Emotion: %75 I love the fact that you have superb rhyming and I ...
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: A Guide To Making A Seriously Powerful Voodoo Doll
Hiya! Reviewing time! Interesting topic and I'd actually like to find out if it works or not! Now who could I use it on *glances around* YOU *points to random ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Where the Wild Dove Sings
Hiya! Review Day Review Mode Activated! Okay, wonderful! Im not even gonna rate this but if i had too it'd get a 100000000000000000000 out of 100. See what I mean? ...
Mar 30, 2014
