Raimunda

I think it could. I hope it would. I wish you knew. I love this bit best of all. It has a sense of rhythm that, although it slips at ...

aaaawwww Megan. You are so marvellously talented. :) This is truly spectacular (!!! new word!). I love it. And you could lie and say it's about Imogen. It could be!!! ...

J'adore this poem. There was some iffy lining and stuff, but I found the more I read it the more the rhymes and wording that I didn't understand, made sense. ...

Heyloo. Je vais reviewer. I keep humming each day, Looking at the path you may take one day. You need something other that 'day'. Words rhyme with themselves, of course, ...

In the beginning, it doesn't really read like a poem. it reads more like a collection of sentences. But then you get into your similies and I can feel a ...

It's really good and the grammar and punctuation was tight. My only problem is that you kind of mix and match romantic wording with modern stuff, like when you have ...

This made me chuckle. My favourite bit? This. 'bout the latest celebrities or brain-washing cults. Lol. I do think some of your rhymes sounded forced, but as if I even ...

When I was reading this, this song came to mind: It's Dry Your Eyes Mate by the Streets and your poem is kind of the same style. This is a ...

Hey Kayyo The thing I found when I read this is that there doesn't really seem to be a pivotal reason behind it. What are you trying to tell me? ...

I understand that this was probably just a spur-of-the-moment thing, but your rhymes seemed really forced. E.G farewell, hell. I don't understand why you're seeing us agin in Hell? Are ...

I like how you built the struggle up and up and up and then when you came to the end you showed us the sense of accomplishment; after a while ...

Laughed at THIS bit- "a list of words potentially forming a dialogue" This was really clever. And now I know that all those guys who didn't talk to me at ...

Lol. Very rude but it gets across all the points people have about why Twilight is bad. I wonder how long it will be before a Twilight-lover attacks you, though. ...

I want to bring my sisters to that place where sunsets live And watch their eyes get wide each time the sky is set on fire. I want them all ...

Hey chuck. Gonna review. Lucky old you. So first off, I really did love the ending. Some of your rhymes are just awesome. eg, I particularly loved: But now set ...