RachitBansal

See, if I comment beyond this poem, I would say, 'look you're only 14, and the poem here so much about love and your feelings with a boy, I mean, ...

Wow!myhis is by now the best poem I've read on this site! Very amazing word! You used perfectly different stanza structured and patterns all through your poem. Emotion was flowing ...

Wow! I do loved this love poem. I generally don't like love things but this one did make me feel something. I love the first stanza: 'i hope that he’s ...

It is a really well written poem. I love the imagery you weaved in the middle of the poem. I love the lines: Why do I hold onto a whisper ...

Oh I dony know what to say for this poem, thus didn't seem like a poem at all, because it was simple to read and understand. I like poems that ...

Oh! I guessed it right, the atmosphere you created from the very beginning did suggest to me that it must be suicide. The way you ended was quite nice. Here's ...

The rhymes here flows perfectly! I really liked how it started, I often like poems that start with sonething natural, related to nature! I've a special love for rhymes as ...

Great lines! This is eens like a blessing before I go on to read a book. :D On to the review: Umm...not much to say on this because it was ...

This is a quite well written piece if poetry! The first stanza gives a hint that this will be a love poem but it is not. Reading through the stanzas ...

I don't really like abusive words in poetry. You used one in the very first line. Poetry is meant for emotions, I don't see many here. You seem to cure ...

I love this poem and the thoughts you painted. I like the following very much : 'small smear of blue in the midst of orange, a piece of hope in ...

Don't worry friend this is not only your case. Thousands like you and me live under these circumstances each moment. We are of the same age and I understand what ...

This is a very striking write! You didn't tell to leaders the reason why we kill, why wars and why differences but also took them through a change. I really ...