RachelLeeAnn

Yes, it is based loosely off of the hymn! Thank you :)

Aw, you're making me blush ^^ thanks for the review!

Thanks for your input! :) would the last line sound better if it were "can't" instead of "do not?"

thanks for the review!^^

Thank you for the review! ^^

Thanks for your kind comment, Jokaly. :)

Hello, Laure! RachelLeeAnn here to review! Though there isn't much subject material to review, I'll do my best. :) I really like the concept behind this. When I read the ...

Wow, many thanks to you! :) I honestly had forgotten about this story. I got busy with work/school/etc., but I feel like if I get some time, I'm gonna continue ...

No worries. Thanks, again! :)

Thanks for the review! The reason I capitalized Fear was because I'm personifying fear, and treating "him" as if he were a person!

Thanks for the review! Ill work on fixing it... As for making The Night and Sleep proper nouns, I did this with the intentions of personifying them; since they are ...

Ah, I see! That's perfectly fine. And ohh, I see it now that you've mentioned it! My mistake.

Thank you for your review! I agreed with most of your corrections, and have fixed them. The rest I felt I liked better the way they are. Thanks again for ...

Thank you! :))

Thank you!:)