Princess

I like this poem in vocabulary, but when it comes to meaning, im drawing a blank... Could you please explain in the end what it means? or add more meaning ...

I hate my poems, They’re pretty shit. So harsh to read- As skin is to grit.{Im sorry, but somehow, this line irks me} My work is horrid,{Your work is fabulous! ...

This poem is great! It tells so much in just two short lines, and personally, I think you should just make it a little longer, so people can get a ...

This is a great poem! the only critique i can give you is: "Come, shadowed dreams Lock away my sanity" Those are the first two lines, and they should rhyme ...

I loved this piece!!! It was very very good.. I cant give any critique to it.. It explains the want and need to be together, and It is awesome.. WOW. ...

that one made me laugh out loud! that was pretty good, and the only critique i can give you is when he asked the audience if they read his bio, ...

Wowowowowow! this one was even better then the last one, and thats saying something!!! Great work!.. and seriously, once again, if you EVER plan to make this into a book, ...

oh wow.This poem is so deep and heartfelt.. It actually made me cry..The only thing i can critique is that, if you are going to have rhymes, then do rhymes ...

This is a great poem! I love the idea for it! the only thing bugging me is the use of rhymes in this poem.. At first, it started with all ...

Wow! while i was reading this poem, i instantally thought " Twilight "..Were you writing this poem based on the book? It is very good.. The only critique i can ...

Wow! you certanley can go deep! this poem is filled with emotion, it brought tears to my eyes.. the only thing i can critique is that when you said people ...

This poem is good, and is a good idea for a poem, but it needs a little work.. The rhymes are really off, try making the last three letters in ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! I see that your new, and I cant wait until i see more of your work! this poem is pretty good, but i want to ...

Wow that was one of the best love/suicide poem i have ever read! there isnt really anything i can critique.. how about instead of I cant call you, make it ...

Wow that was pretty good! It is so emotional, and it has a hidden message within it.. the only part i can critique is: "Some say she wished to hard" ...