It was pretty good, sounds like a real witch could say in a ritual or something.
As already has been said, the first 2 lines should rhyme, 'cause all the others do too.
Also some of the lines don't really "flow", mainly the last 2.
Some lines were really good, while others are a bit less.
For the rest I don't really have a lot to say. :] It describes pretty well how a witch thinks about life and death.
Points: 890
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