Pompadour

Hey Ariana, I'm here to review! The first stanza! *shivers* I really liked it! The flow was good and the words yelled: "IMPACT!" But I found the change in font ...

Hey, Sonic! Your poem is spirited! I like that! Usually, poems are dark and never focus on the "glass-is-half-full" aspect of things. I liked that tinge of humour you inserted, ...

Haha, reading this, I found the perspective adorable! You conveyed the innocence of the character well. However, there are a few places where the meaning of what you were trying ...

Haha, I loved this poem! It made for a refreshing read! Hey Sparkle, your poem sparkles! It felt like a bit of Roald Dahl for er... bigger people. But you ...

Hey! I'm here for a quick review! Ok, I could see that your poem definitely needs some work. It's obvious that you're trying to get it to rhyme, but let ...

OK, review time! Your poem started out on a good poetic note, and I like how you wrote: "How can it be that one second is and then was?" But ...

This is really nice! The poem flows freely and has a distinctive rhythm. Normally, poems that rhyme with every two verses are often seen as childish, but you've pulled it ...

This is a good piece, but I feel it sort of lacks the poetic touch. It's more narrative(ish) than like a poem. For example: "I can see him. In the ...

Hey ziggiefred! I like how you began the thing. It was simple, yet observant. But as the paragraph carried on... it sort of had a "forced" touch to it. There ...

Hey aouther2b! When I began to read this poem, I liked the way you started it off. The beginning made sense, like inspiration striking a stone-cold floor. But after that... ...

This is actually very interesting! I'd like to see where this goes next! Your grammar is great, and I really enjoyed reading this. I'd like to point something out to ...

Okay, seriously. Your description is beautiful! But it's too poetry, less prosy. It's always great to get a description of the character, but I feel that you've repeated yourself several ...