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Re: The Glass Floor
Hey, Wolf! Pomp here for The Big Review . Because I have six reviews to write (yelp) and because this is a great piece anyway, I'll try to make this ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: Lines of Faith: Chapter 1
Yo, Books. Pomp here for a The Big Review review and all~ I'm going to make this quick. My first critique is going to be your beginning. I'm always very ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: Billi Wack and the Story of Mystery- Chapter 1
MUTANT GOAT BABY, WHERE? Hi, Tues! Here for a The Big Review review and shizz~ I haven't read through any of the previous reviews, so feel free to ignore me ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: The Trip Up To the Attic
Hey, Tues! Pomp here for The Big Review . I'm so sorry for the lateness; life's been getting in the way recently~ “Eddie , there is bound to be something ...
Jul 12, 2015 -
Re: 500 Miles
Hello, Carlito! Pomp here for The Big Review . I've never been too great at critiquing lyrics, but seeing as I could find nothing recent to review, I hope you'll ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: Black cherries
Hey, shaon~ I haven't reviewed poetry in a while, so I thought I'd try to get back into that biz. As it is, I'm going to make this quick. Right, ...
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: Tiger Stripes: Chapter 1 ~ Memory Cards
Howdy, Wolf! Pomp here for a The Big Review review~ Let's get to business. As usual, I'll review as I read, then we'll talk generally about the whole piece. Beginning: ...
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: Thoughts; pronoun
Hey, Hatt. I'm here to review this piece for you~ That being said, I'll make this short. Happy Review Day! First things first: this is not a haiku. Haiku is ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: The Life of Eli Miles: Bad to Good
Howdy, Byrd~ Happy Review Day! So, what I liked about this was that you have a good handle on knowing what you want from your story; you've pretty much decided ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 1
Yo, Moony~ Let's get to business. Happy Review day! So you've got a couple of pretty good reviews, but I've only skimmed through them--forgive me if I repeat anything that's ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Tomorrow's Tornado - Chapter 1
Hello~ You've got some pretty great reviews here, but I thought I'd drop by to talk about description and writing style--general things. Happy Review Day! So I've noticed that you ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Possession, Part 1
Howdy, Silver~ Pomp here for a quick review! So, the first thing that caught my eye was the whitespace; I'm assuming it was a formatting error, and I've been victim ...
Jun 16, 2015 -
Re: Bloody Frosting (FTT Ark vs Holy)
Yo, Holy. Pomp here for a quick review! I've noticed that Falunel's already covered a lot of the technical errors, so I won't be spending much time on the grammar ...
Jun 20, 2015 -
Re: A Time to Pretend
Hey, Nessa~ So this review is going to be pretty short. I'll try to be thorough, though, so hang tight. Before I begin, just letting you know that I bumped ...
Jun 16, 2015 -
Re: Cactus Leaves-- Order of Light (Ch. 3)
Hola! Thanks for letting me know this was upp~ You know how I roll, so I'll spare you the intro. The rock I was kicking on the way home from ...
Jun 14, 2015
