PoetryMisfit

Hello Campergirl, I thought I'd leave a quick review. Okay I gotta say: I was expecting a more fantastical setting based on the name of your story. I think that ...

Hello Nightengalewriting. What an enchanting story! It was sweet, whimsical, and had a wonderful fairytale flow. Your characters are dynamic and distinguishable so it was not hard to keep track ...

Hello Roostangarar, I thought I'd leave a quick review. "Susurration", I learned a new word from you! The tension is so palpable at the start of your story, I feel ...

Hey there YellowSweater. I am going to leave a quick review. First things first, I want to express my specific thoughts as I went through your story, and then I ...

Hello TheRebel2007. This poem is so incredibly sweet. From what I understand, this poem is addressed to the Narrator's child? I love how you touch on a different subject in ...

Hello Jellyfish505, I thought I'd leave a quick review. Your first sentence immediately had me hooked. It set the tone well for the protagonist's anguish. "The pressure globs up, choking ...

Hi Wyd.Evie, I thought I'd leave a quick review. Your first line immediately drew me in - hooke, line, and sinker. You did an incredible job with your descriptions. You ...

Hello Maxwellisunwell. I thought I'd leave a quick review. I really enjoyed your poem. It was very emotionally provocative and sweet. At the begining of your poem, with the way ...

Hello TypoWithoutCoffee. Now your username has so much more meaning behind it! This poem almost feels like a tribute to the name you use on here so that we may ...

Hello Julia002, just wanted to leave a quick review. This piece really subverts expectations, which is a really good quality to have in writing. I was expecting this to go ...

Hi there! This piece is very beautiful and poetic. There is almost a stream-of-consciousness style about it that really adds to your musings of twilight. Twilight really is such a ...

Hi there! I enjoyed your story, and I have a few suggestions that I think will make it even stronger (I apologize in advance for the nit-pickiness of my comments, ...

Hi there! I wanted to leave a quick review! First off, I love the way you started this piece; the initial line instantly had me hooked. You do a great ...

Hi there! I wanted to leave a quick review. I really enjoyed your poem which had the perfect balance of comical cynicism and a sad dose of reality. You expose ...

Hi there! I just wanted to leave a quick review. I really love this poem - it's short but very beautiful in its simplicity. I love the repetition at the ...