PoetryMisfit

Hi WaywardxWanderer. First off, the contrast in genres (dramatic and humorous) instantly intrigued me. I was interested to see how you melded these two genres together in your story, and ...

Hi Plume. I read Part 1 of this story, loved it, and after reading Part 2, I adore it equally so! You do a great job of expressing the personalities ...

Hi Helpless42. I'm curious to know the meaning behind your username. On with the review! Your story begins with great use of imagery, and there is a comical tone that ...

Hi VintageGirl. This poem really hit home with me, I could connect to all of the examples you lyrically divulged. This poem engaged my desire to be transported into the ...

Hi ReubenShupp. First off, I noticed you recently joined YWS so welcome! I also admire the fact that you self-published this story through Amazon. It's very encouraging to see writers ...

Hi WaywardxWanderer. First off I gotta say I adore your profile pic. Howl's Moving Castle is one of my favorite Studio Ghibli films. I even posted a wallpaper from that ...

Hi ZongzhengJinghang. First off, I noticed you joined YWS yesterday so welcome to our writing platform! I hope your experience on here is pleasant and insightful. With that being said ...

Hi Plume, I thought I'd leave a quick review. Like Mailice mentioned below, Alberta and Nova remind me of Sherlock and Watson. Their personalities are dynamic and expressed very well ...

Hi , thought I'd leave a quick review. I really enjoyed this piece. It was snarky and comical in all the right ways. Some lines I particularly snorted at were: ...

Hi AceassinoftheMoon, I thought I'd leave a quick review. This was a fun piece to read, and the short sentences even gave the story a bit of a rhythm. The ...

Hello Soulless Ginger. Your title immediately captured my attention, and I'm so glad it did. This piece struck me less as a story and more as an essay that morphs ...

Hello Thistle, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I want to start by saying I'm in love with this piece! I really enjoyed your imagery and the concepts imbued ...

Hello Buranko, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I was really intrigued by your title, which reminded me of a movie called Mirror Mask. This poem is concise and ...

Hello Nativecatcher, I thought I'd leave a quick review. Your title immediately captured my attention and gave me the impression of a name rooted in Greek or some other mythology. ...

Hello Scarlettfire, I thought I'd leave a quick review. This poem is beautiful and bittersweet. The narrator has a bitter tone towards her beloved or rather the receiver of her ...