PixieStix

Hello, Pix here to review this for you! First of all, welcome to YWS, I hope you find as much joy in this website as I do! :) Topic: I ...

Hello! Pix here to review this for you! To start, I wanted to really appreciate the formatting here, it made the poem easy to read. I like how you indented ...

Hello! Pix here to review this for you! I really love the topic you chose for this poem, I think this is a super important message to spread, and you ...

Hello! Pix here to review this for you. I was automatically drawn to this poem because of the description-- I had actually just gotten out of a toxic relationship and ...

Hello! Pix here to review this lovely poem for you! I have to start out by saying, this peice really moved me. With everything going on in the world right ...

Hello, Horisun! Pix here to review this for you! :) Firstly, I just wanted to point out how creative this idea is. I never thought about actually writing about my ...

Hello, Pix here to review this lovely poem for you! So, I was rather intrigued by the title: I'm weirdly into poems like this. :3 Lets start with the first ...

Hello! Pix here to say a few words :) I'm guessing this is from your personal point of view, so I'm going to write this as if it is. I'm ...

Hi, Pix here to review these peices for you! I remember having to do something like this in Creative Writing at my highschool. It was actually a super fun experience, ...

Hi, Pix here to review this for you! :) I love rap, so when I saw this lyrical piece I was just so tempted to read; and I'm definitely not ...

Hey Audy, here once gain to review! This poem is very clear, and I find it easy to understand. Your first stanza- I don't really get why there are two ...

Hey, Audy! Katie here! I love how you started out this poem, it gave us a sense of what the work is really about. The first paragraph (I'm just guessing) ...

Hey, Katie here. I really liked this. Logan Lerman is mine... uhm. Okay. Back on topic. So... your fanfiction. I agree with Mal, I would've just left the first like ...

Hey, Katie here to review! Okay, first off. What I liked about this. - I love how in the stanza's there were two pairs of rhyming lines. I love this, ...

Hey, Pix here to review! I find this very interesting. I honestly can't say I disliked anything in the poem. It's detailed, has good spelling grammar, and you tell the ...