PickledChrissy

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Okay, I'm just going to work my way through and tell you what I think about it as we go. Sound good? because she ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, let's see if I can rip it to shreds what I can find. :D When we say "They move across the sky" We ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, once again, welcome to the site! I'm happy I caught your first work, it's a beauty. Well, I'd better get to work. :D ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Are you aware how hard it is to review something like this? ;) It's too short to find any really big mistakes. Well, guess ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Excuse me while I go pound my head into the wall until this makes sense. Though I'm not sure it will help much. :D ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Okay, this is a really cool idea. I haven't seen many people do this. I shouldn't be able to find every much, but I'll ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Do you mind if I go straight to reviewing? Occasional cool breezes drifted through slim white arches of a palace loggia, carrying a perfume ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Um, I was wondering can you tag me next time you post? I almost missed this part, and I don't want to miss any ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! No offense, but this work is awesome. :D You made a couple little mistakes, and most of them EternalRain pointed out for you. But ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! This work is downright awesome. I don't know how much I am going to be able to find, but I will try. Just from ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, first things first, I agree with the other reviewer. You need to write more. This is way too short. Everyone wants more! You ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well let's see if I can rip it apart what I can find. :D he mocked, with a scowl of impatience on his face. ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, I was cruising through Greenroom and saw your work. I remembered reading Limbo, and some other poem, forget which. You're written so many. ...

Heya, welcome to YWS! Chrissy here for a review! This is your first work, isn't it? Good job. It's kinda short, so this review will be a little short. I'm ...

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Finally! Another one of your chapters. Now I can rip it to shreds give you some friendly feedback. ;) Well, this chapter does not ...