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Heya, Chrissy here for a review!
Okay, this is a really cool idea. I haven't seen many people do this. I shouldn't be able to find every much, but I'll do my best!
Okay, IS in. And NO one else. And it should be CARES.
A bit of redundancy. You say Both twice. You can just remove the second time, you don't need it.
Glitter on their uniforms! Ewww... That sounds interesting, to say the least.
I think that should "I have to go." Also at the end of the sentence get ride of the go. It is not needed.
Use the word nine, not 9.
Comma between Luck and Diary.
That's it! Can't find anything else to point out. *sniffs* You need to make more mistakes so I can rip to shreds.
Keep writing!
Good job! First of all I really like the idea of writing this from the view of her diary. I'm just going to be a little nitpicky with some grammatical errors, like when you said "know one else cared". And when you capitalized" basketball". Other than that I really i joyed reading this.
Keep it up, I hope to see more!
Mercyecho