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Re: The Sea Witch of Atlantica
Hello there, good morning! I think we both know why we’re here, so I’ll get right into it. The pros will come first, some general impressions second, and constructive criticism ...
Aug 30, 2024 -
Re: Aspasia’s decay
Hello there, fellow writer here, hope you’re having a nice day! I think we both know why we’re here, so I’ll get right into it. The pros will come first, ...
Aug 30, 2024 -
Re: You Spoke My Langauge
Hello there! Hope you’re having a nice day, just popped by to share my thoughts. What drew me to this poem, first and foremost, was the way it is so ...
Feb 7, 2024 -
Re: I told, I wanted, I wished.
Hello again friend! I’m back from the dead and once again prepared to offer some (hopefully useful) feedback. To start off, I have to appreciate your choice of analogy. The ...
Feb 7, 2024 -
Re: dont look up [and see me dying]
Hello there! How has your day been going? I’ve dropped by to give a small review, everything is subjective, don’t take me too seriously. From the beginning, this piece struck ...
Feb 6, 2024 -
Re: Why do you hate me?
Hello friend : ) here to leave a small review, I hope that’s okay this early into the New Year. I have to admit, the first time I read this, ...
Jan 2, 2024 -
Re: In defense of being dramatic
Hello friend! I have popped by to leave a review on this masterpiece. If not helpful, then at the very least I hope it makes your day just that bit ...
Dec 30, 2023 -
Re: Nature/Nurture
Hello, the blob here, come to leave a small review on this marvellous piece. There is quite a bit to talk about so let’s start with all the things that ...
Dec 28, 2023 -
Re: The Songs of The Witch
Hello again! I was going to enjoy this without bothering you further, but since no one has mentioned it yet… This story reads a lot like folklore. The talking animals ...
Dec 27, 2023 -
Re: The Death of The Last Intelligent Life
Hello there, Happy Holidays! I’m here to leave a little review, nothing too in depth, just my general impressions and interpretations. Literature is subjective, anyone is free to disagree with ...
Dec 27, 2023 -
Re: Love Letter she'll never read
Hello! It’s me, the blob. When I first read this, I was viscerally reminded of the first time I read Sappho - mostly on account of all the visceral rawness ...
Dec 26, 2023 -
Re: In My Dream
Hello, I’m here to leave a small review : ) I apologise for any issues regarding proper articulation of ideas, this is a very good poem and I am but ...
Dec 26, 2023 -
Re: prey/hunter
Hello there! I popped by to give this a little read and have been so enraptured by it that it would be a mistake to leave without a review. I ...
Dec 26, 2023
