PhoenixXander

I meant to change the perspective. I'm tired of hearing that honestly haha.

Hello, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your piece! I like how you kept it short, kind of leaving the reader hanging! Very cool, I've done that myself and everyone ...

True, I could have added a paragraph about Leelah, I guess I didn't think about it because everyone who was at the event that I wrote this poem for knew ...

Thanks! I agree that I could have formatted it better, but it was written only to be spoken, and I didn't think I'd even translate it here but some of ...

The point is for it to be vague.

When you go into submit a work there are options under where you put the title, there's one that looks like a picture, click it to add your picture. That's ...

This is too rhyme-y, and it sounds like every other poem that uses nature to compare to emotions. I want to review it but it's kind of painful to read. ...

Happens to me a lot too, no problem!

Haha, we seem to be having a back and forth review thing going on. (; I always appreciate your reviews, thanks!

Love this a lot, it's so beautiful, and I can really relate to it. (: nice job.

I see where you're coming from, imagery makes a better poem, but I just don't see that in this poem. It's more about being realistic. What really happened.

Okay, you sure can! I'll reply as soon as I can, always! (:

Okay, I'll remember the stanza thing! Thanks for the review! (:

Rude, I demand to hear the joke! :b

This ugh, it hits me hard. Lovely poem.