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Comment comment comment. I just felt like commenting on this. You know. So how's life. I like your works. I really don't know why you don't post more often. I like pie.
And here I was, so excited to read a good joke :/
As far as editing literary works, I really hate that I can't delete works that I'm done with. All they do is clog up my drafts folder and since I have OCD, it's super annoying. It would be great if you guys could create a way for us to delete works from our drafts folder 
I am appalled that you used conjunctions in an essay, Nate! The length of this piece, while appropriate for the topic you wanted to discuss, was as such that it did not manage to thoroughly explore the reasoning behind the monkey's actions. I was also slightly confused when the monkey ate the macerena, but dismissed it as one of the humorous aspects of the piece.
Hello Nate!
My name's Aley and I'm here to comment today.
First of all I'd like to say that you did a really good job out of bold, but I think this work could still see some improvement.
One way that it could improve is that you've got really long sentences. For instance, look at this.
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which I find really refreshing and well planned, but you could use some work on variety since you have a lot of it and there should only be a lot of it in a work like this.Ouch!
I really like the first word. The rest of the piece seems rather disjointed, especially when compared to the title.
And you used chat speak in the first sentence. That's a no-no.
What if the moderator, the YWSer, and the monkey were THE SAME PERSON?! OMG. PLOT TWIST.
In any case, I think you're monkeying around with this...
Also, if you mark this as a review, I'll be able to continue my conquest with teh most reviewz evar. MWHAHAHAHA.
Which is why it'll probably be marked for spam. *le sigh*
This made me cry. I thought it would be a joke, but it was so touching instead. Thank you.
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I found it amusing when the bartender realized that the monkey could talk. He looked so ill the monkey took over for him.
Unlike Lumi, my favorite part was when the YWSer pulled out his light saber and tried to kill everyone in the bar. Good times, man.
My favorite part was when the monkey realized that he had the magic inside him all along.
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