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Whoa... This would certainly convince me to buy the game. This brings back memories of watching the Lord of the Rings films with my family. I really liked how each ...

Man, I have to say, this one was far better than the prior chapter I reviewed. That isn't to say that the other chapter was bad. I quite enjoyed it, ...

Ello! Let's dive right into this with a short review. "The pills were very large, even though she had been taking the new pills for two weeks she still couldn't ...

Ello! Phoenix here for a little review. Honestly, this felt a bit incoherent to me. That's okay! This is a rough draft after all. That being said, the story has ...

Whoo! Poems aren't exactly my strong suite, but it won't stop me from enjoying/reviewing them! Just take what I say with a tiny grain of salt. Grammar/Style: The grammar seems ...

Hey, Pheonix review time! This was a lovely short piece. I didn't see any grammatical errors, and you stylistic choices (Word choice, punctuation, italics, sentence structure) were well done and ...

Hi! This is a very recent post, but it isn't too long, so I can give a pretty quick review. In terms of grammar, I am not an expert on ...

Ah, another Phoenix, that's interesting. I'm glad I can offer a review for this. I appear to be jumping into part 43 of this series, so I will have to ...

This comes of as a riddle at first. Awesome! I do quite like riddles. And introducing a poem as a riddle is a really interesting concept. It immediately hooks the ...

Criticism is absolutely key! It's a lovely response to a work, because, contrary to popular belief, it isn't just about talking about the faults of a work. Rather, it focuses ...

Ah, it feels good to be back on this website. Let us begin with my first review back here, and.... This is a very good poem! I'm glad I came ...

Hey hey hey, here to leave a small bit of thoughts on this one. I've been reviewing poetry recently, but I'm new at it, so do take my feedback with ...

Hey, for a first time poetry attempt this was pretty good! Reading it flowed well and I never felt it broke off or anything like that. The rhyming was consistent ...

Hello! Very interesting story, here are some thoughts. The first sentence doesn't need the word but, as the first and second parts aren't contradictory. You probably don't need the sentence ...

This was a truly breathtaking kind of poem. We never realize how important something truly is until it is gone. I really like the format used here, the lines match ...