Peregrine

I really like this piece. I'm guessing it is about a dog? The rythym of this is very well crafted. Your word choices are quite good, I particularly like the ...

What can I say? I love it! I Love It! I LOVE IT!!! The rhyme is so easy to follow and understand. It is easy to say, and is very ...

A very peaceful and beautifully crafted piece here, HHemayed. It's stanzas have a nice rythym to them. It is very clear that you spent a lot of time on this, ...

As you said this was a creepy story, I was expecting something to make my hair stand on end. It chilled me a little, but I'm sure that with some ...

These are very cool lyrics! Well done for it. I believe this is about a GF and BF? I think it's the BF thinking he's been used by the GF. ...

Well done for a fascinating story! It was really interesting to hear your own take on an old tale that had been used loads of times. I was a bit ...

I really like this poem, it is well balanced. The vocabulary, although some of it I am unfamiliar with, is easy to weave into the words and I find it ...

I think it's music. I don't really know why but some songs send shivers down your spine, they definitely make you move. Do they not touch you? Hmmm, struggling on ...

I really like this piece of writing. There are quite a few spelling mistakes, but I'm sure if you read through again you could easily sort these out. The injury ...

I like this story, and I find it interesting. Before I read this, I read your prologue, which made me keen to know more. It is rather overwhelming as one ...

This is a very dramatic piece of writing. It is very hard-hitting and riddled with hooks to snag the reader. There is only one small problem, if you continue, I ...