Percybeth

XD yes i do read Percy Jackson and i ship those two very very much! And thanks for the review!

Love this!! XD

Wow, alright to start off, I appreciate this review a helluva bunch. I've never had one quite so detailed, but I embrace all of your words, your recommendations and suggestions! ...

Thank you so much!! This makes me smile a whole bunch! :)

Hey! So I actually really appreciate the amount of thought you put into your review! To clear up some confusion I found you had: the title finished the last line. ...

Wow, sorry for my awful grammar here xD I was too stubborn to proofread, I should listen to my conscious more often.

It's funny you tried to play that little trick on me with the I's because I didn't even notice it until you mentioned it! I always like the way words ...

xD ^^^ thank you! I was having such a blonde moment, I couldn't figure it out!

Ohhh I'm getting it! And he doesn't feel anything unless there is something else! Ahh, thats brilliant! Awesome job!

Gahh

I. Love. This. No suggestions. It's simply perfection.

CreativityWritten, This is really beautiful. Perfect job reincarnating the original saying! It's very fit for our generation. I just keep reading it over and I love it! Keep expressing! -percybeth

Literal chills. Fantastic job. I'm speechless.

Oh! Well I just thought black smoke as burning and it was so dense that it was suffocating, rolling in like heavy fog. But it's really cool to hear how ...

Actually this poem is not about depression. And I also have no idea where you found an octopus comparison within it. I don't believe I even made a metaphor to ...