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  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Politics Re: Not Your Scapegoat

    Hola Georgia, Stella, Just gonna jump in for a moment to say I think perhaps you've misunderstood some of Stella's commentary on your song, Georgia. Which isn't to say that ...

    Jul 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: i never expected to be queen so soon

    To be honest, the main reason I don't like this poem is what I've stated, it's a well weak poem. Don't get me wrong, I'm super cool with prose poetry ...

    Jan 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Humor Re: Twelfth Night: Chapter One

    Hullo hullo Knight, I hope you feel duly honoured to be my first review in soo long. I like what you're doing here! I enjoy Twelfth Night as a play ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Come Summer

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! never be too intimidated to review - I love feedback!

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: somethings and nothings and in betweens

    You can totally critique it but just be aware that there are many conventions of grammar and punctuation that poetry ignores, because it is about expressing emotions through all parts ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Chapter 2: Sanctuary

    No worries! You have a good style right now so I'm sure you'll just keep writing more and more awesome stuff! :D

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Literature, General Re: Wordsmithing: The Circle of Philosophy

    I forgot to say. If you upload an image to an image hosting site you can then attach that link inside the tags and that will give you the image. ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Kira's Story, Chapter 7

    I definitely forgot about Eben.

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: lover bo1

    Hullo! Just letting you know that while we can't actually fix the formatting at the moment (this is an ongoing issue Nate is working on) I have just made the ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Almost Dead (part two)

    I read that... it doesn't make much sense to me. xD I assume you'll explain it later though.

    Jul 1, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: Social Media: Yes, times have changed

    So sorry! Late night review! Uhm, yes. I'd take it out. This might be too late now, I didn't realise you commented!

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: Sleepless Hours

    Not even a little biased, you asked for me to rip and so I did. I could be nicer next time if you like!

    Feb 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: i refuse to take the night

    This is seriously amazing. "I refuse to take the night" is amazing. Ughhhh. I should come back and review this. Remind me. So good.

    Feb 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: crazy little pills

    The splitting it up isn't a in-the-end look, it was just so you could see the difference between situations? In terms of poetic description. But I dig being unsure about ...

    Feb 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: Another Message From the Cosmos

    You totes did it right and I didn't take this seriously, but a review has to take things seriously. xD Its a solid bit of satire, don't you worry and ...

    Feb 4, 2013


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