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I liked the concept of the piece although I think you should be wary of the dreaded cliche. It was a little stagnate, in that you decribed everything but without ...

I like this, a lot. Drawn in from the first image it did not dissapoint my expectations. Although I found that sometimes the run-on sentances were not necessary. Such as ...

I liked the concept of this poem, and I also enjoyed much of your description, you have talent with imagery (which is, as far as I'm concerned, one of the ...

While I had some small problems with the flow of this I think it may be attributed (as Amelia mentioned) to the spaces inbetween the lines. However that was my ...

I am in complete awe with how fantastic that was, really. *~* AWE *~* That said... In the sentance below you repeat 'it' a few times, it sticks out, is ...

I like this, everyone before me has presented any of the issues I could have found with it so I have only to say I likes its :D Keep it ...

Ohhhh I liked this! I had a little trouble with the flow, but nothing that hasnt been mentioned. I like how simple it was and the ease with which I ...

Tonight, I let go of you, take up your shoes, unlace them, make a Cat's Cradle-- the last such delicate world to be controlled by my fingers. I think, maybe, ...

That was wonderful! I loved the feeling of the poem - as one who never liked Hide and Seek all that much - *nods* most wonderous. My only issue is ...

Hokay, these seems to be part of a story, like a small excerpt (I can't spell for the life of me >.

While I do think this is a wonderfully described poem, I also agree with Sean Pendr in that I think a more free form style of poetry may be the ...

Hey, this was quite good =D Some small issues come in the line "and flesh" after the breadcrumbs, it seems out of place, and completely unneccesary. Though I may be ...

Ohhh! I really liked this! The theory behind as well as the writing, you let it move along by itself, gradually moving towards the pinicle of information hehe. I also ...

Lovely, I think flash fiction is my all time favourite fiction =D and this, this would ahve to be up there, I loved how I could feel how bad it ...

Aww, poor mist hehe. Don't worry. I liked it :D I seriously did. As a writer who can, it seems, only really write short stories, I understood this, I followed ...