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Yo there, This is a pretty terrible poem I have to say. I k ow that you are creating a parody and that at the same time you are probably ...

Maggie, my lovely! What an excellent poem you have here. I know, it isn't a poem, it is an experience, but I dont care because this is totally a poem, ...

Hey hey! This is a super good NaPo poem, it is a super good poem in general! So much nice work here. Aaargh so jealous you are writing beautiful napo ...

Hullo there! This is definitely a very dark poem! I will not hold that against you though because i think your imagery is working splendidly. I dislike rhyme on principle ...

Hi Nargles! Minimalist poetry can be the most amazing thing sometimes, you get to have all of the feeling with as little fuss as possible, and who does not love ...

Hi ariane! This is an interesting piece of prose poetry. You have decided on giving us short paragraphs rather than short lines, and it was the right way to go. ...

Hullo there! Please keep in mind during this review that I have not had the pleasure of reading your previous chapter just yet - although I might go and find ...

Hullo hullo! I am sory to say that I am coming to this from the Green Room not having read your other chapters, but I am highly impressed. You have ...

Hello! This Travis bloke seems like a right jerk! Like full on, he obviously got drunk and had a fight and maybe jnsulted his girlfriend in the process but by ...

Hola Tulip! This is an interesting chapter. You'll know that I havent read your other chapters so this critique will be based entirely on the words before me! I am ...

Hullo Hullo, This is an interesting piece, thank you for posting it. I havent read the other chapters so I am going off the back of this one piece of ...

Hola Tulip! I don't usually engage with non-fiction works, but for you (and the green room) I shall do my best! This is an interesting essay and I wonder what ...

Hullo Welt! This is a very interesting chapter! I like the amount of action you have and the interaction between characters works very well, you can tell these guys have ...

Hola MBrooks! Lovely to meet you! This is an interesting work, I appreciate the strength and clarity of your narrator, as that direct voice helps us progress through the story ...

Hey Forticuno! The stream of consciousness paragraph about the tree and such is the best paragraph here. The three that follow are fine, nothing wrong with them essentially, but your ...