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Hi Deetea, Let's launch straight into this without any of that mucking about, shall we? I like the simplicity of your language and the clarity of your message, or rather ...

Hullo Ooh, Welcome to the site and to posting poetry, I always love to see a lot of poetry posted and commented on so that my lust for lovely words ...

Laureno! So you already know that I like this, so let's launch into what I have to say about it. I think your intro is clunky. It may be done ...

Hey Maggie! You're right, this isn't your best. It's missing something that I usually find in your poems, a sense of the core of it, perhaps? I know, though, how ...

Hi Talia, I know a poem about depression must be a difficult thing to write, if it is close to your heart. Personal pieces of work are always hard to ...

Hi Rhia! I hope you're having a lovely day. So I think this poem is a little too cliched at this point. Your imagery is a bit stagnant and we're ...

Hey Princess, I'm going to throw a review down here. It's been a while since I reviewed something of yours (forever? I'm not sure!) so I'm not sure how exactly ...

Righto, Forticuno, Let's slam right on in and say that while I understand what you're doing with the sectioning and letting us read it however we want, it's so unlikely ...

Hey there Lemisa, Now I know this is a role play but you could work with this to make it something more like a story very easily. You have a ...

Audster This is an incredible piece of prose poetry. It marks the form excellently, inviting us into a narrative we have no business being a part of. We are becoming ...

Hey Ishbishmish!

Hola, I think you have an interesting piece here. I like particularly that you aren't mucking about with a lot of self pity with your narrator. This speaker is aware ...

Hello, Hello, I've just come from your second entry and thought I might take a step back and have a look at this one too. I like that you have ...

Hullo, hullo, You have an interesting piece of work here, though I have yet to read the first section (I will get to that after this review, perhaps!) I can ...

Hullo Savvy! This is a very interesting poem you have here! One might choose to call it a prose poem, due to the sectns which are more closely connected to ...