Role play chiz
Can you see that? There, in the shadows. Oh my gosh, it’s….!!!
Comment by Melisa on October 11, 2014
Dead, like a ghost, or a swan- OMG! I think, it’s a SM ambush! No, not the school master it’s…
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 11, 2014
RUN RUN RUN!!!
Comment by Melisa on October 11, 2014
I’m RUNNING! The one day Olive is gone- oh, now I get it.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 11, 2014
To: “Queen” Ivy Rose
Your Majesty, I really hate to say this but I’m rebelling against your so called Never Government.
To: All Nevers
Join the Never Battlefront and rebel a against our queen. We are not Evers, we need no government. We need no king or queen. We rule ourselves.
Comment by Jack, Warlord of the Nevet Battlefront on October 11, 2014
To Z
Oh my gosh. I’d say don’t look down, but we’re dangling over the moat from the School Master’s Tower. Our arms and legs are useless and blood is rushing to our heads. We blackout. Only when we wake up….well, I think we found Sophie.
To Olive
How’s your mission going with Matt? Your back up needs back up.
Comment by Melisa with Z; i think we found Sophie on October 11, 2014
To: Melissa
From: Jack
Jump now. My ships are in the most and are ready to bombard that tower. And if you want to know why I’m doing this? I’m rebelling.
Comment by Warlord Jack on October 11, 2014
To- everyone
From-Willowwind
The things good does. When they saw my shadow they screamed and ran away. Yes that was me. Me with the SM and Sophie. ME the leader of the nevers and the greatest evil since Sophie. Ask yourself nevers, why are we fighting against our rise to power? With the curse broken there’s nothing we can’t do. The storian will cave in upon itself and nothing in this pathetic little world will stop us. Almost everything I’ve ever said on here has been a lie. So tell your ‘Queen’ ivy rose that her rebellion is ill fated. There will always be something watching her. I guess I’m a one person army, but I’m more evil than all of you put togeather.
WW
Comment by Willowwind on October 11, 2014
To: Melisa
I grab Sophie’s hair and pull it hard. She goes to cast a spell, but stops quickly when I cut off a hand full of her gold locks. You throw hand full off your special dust stuff, and we run. Holding your hand so you can see through charms, we dash through through the tower. Sophie screams behind us. My head burns with pain, and you don’t look that great either. You pull me through the trap door and into the black.
To: Olive
We don’t need back up! On the way to the dorms we were captured, and sent to the island, but we are almost out!
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 11, 2014
To: Willow wind
I didn’t run. I was the girl standing there laugh a Beatrix smeared her makeup from crying, then cried about smeared makeup.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 11, 2014
To:Olive
Sorry it took so long. I’m taking the back way in.
Bio: I’m the son of….I hate it but.: King Stefan. King Stefan was actually married before Queen Leah.to a young woman named: Aria. Aria was actually a wealthy witch, unknown to the public by her rich status, but known to the public by her most common name: Malefcient. Oh,I know generic. I was brought up in hatred and all that good stuff, to soon be sent to the school for Evil, and be the most powerful villain of all time. My mother taught me the most powerful evil, until one day she disappeared for about a month, I soon figured it out that it was because she was taking revenge on my father and his precious daughter, since he dumped me and my mother at birth, Aurora. She curse her. And you know the rest of the story. But, anyway’s I have the most powerful sorcery beside the Evil Queen, and Rumpelstiltskin. THE END. And they lived happily Never After.
To:Everyone
My POV:
I climbed the last brick as I entered the school masters tower, the room was surprisingly empty. I look around nervously, until I hear a small whimper coming from the window sill. I race over to it, and see none other then: Z. She had barely any breath left in her. I grabbed her hand just as she blacked out. I pulled her inside quickly still nervous that no one was present.
To:Melisa and Nevers
I see what you say behind my back…And for your reference I’m almost more powerful then the School Master. Pure Evil here. Don’t say things Good will regret.
To:Jack
I’m second in command, so don’t go rebelling. And Queen is only a position name, it’s like president being called king. That’s it. And Jack I will bust you up, kid. *Midget*
Comment by Matt on October 11, 2014
To:Jack
I’m twice as powerful as your mother. Imagine what I am to her son. And I gave you the Navy, you don’t control it. The Navy is on my side no matter what. And besides we don’t have time for your puny rebellions, we have more important things to do.
To:Everyone
My Mother was-and is- The Evil Queen. I grew up in Snow White’s jail. Never seeing a glimpse of sunlight. My mother also taught me the most powerful magic, able to defeat anyone who would not go under my command. I was destined to be a queen.
Comment by Ivy Rose on October 11, 2014
To:Olive
Question:Where are you?I climbed through the moat and went through the tower, but can’t find you.
Comment by Matt on October 11, 2014
To: Ivy Rose
I realize you have me the Navy, but I took it. I killed those who were still loyal to you. And about my grandmother, I killed her and all the snow bees who would not obey me as their king. You have no hold over me. I am the King of the Snow Bees, never forget that.
Comment by Warlord Jack on October 11, 2014
To: Everyone
As we fall, Melisa and are are torn apart. I find my self in a room, quietly repeating Melisa’s name over and over again, as if it would bring her back. Suddenly, a shadow appears, tall, black. At first I think it’s Melisa, but I soon see it is Matt, a never. He grabs my hand, just before I blacked out. I woke up in the scariest way possible: with my head on Matt’s shoulder.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 11, 2014
To: Everyone ( I’m on the quest)
From: Olive
My POV:
I follow the man in black inside the hole in the tower. I wait outside for a minute. Then I go in, ready to reveal who the the guy is. His hood is down, and I can see scraggly dark hair shooting in every direction. He’s leaning over someone… an I get a glimpse at who it is.
My dagger shocks the back of the guys neck, and the cold metal presses against it. He slowly turns around, and I see dark eyes peering into my soul.
“What was that–” He starts.
“What did you do to her?!” My eyes have a storm brewing inside them and my face is tight with seriousness. I peer at Z’s pained face. Someone as going to pay for this.
“I don’t know–” I shock him again.
“Then who did?!”
“I found her.” He gets up on his feet. My dagger is still pointed at his throat, but he isn’t putting his hands up in alarm, like all the Evers I knew would. My guess, he’s a Never. “And that’s no way to treat an ally.”
I lower my dagger, but still in striking position. The man in black was Matt, my ally for the quest.
I turn my attention to Z. “I told you not to come. Are there other’s?” She nods. “Crud.” I add on. “Gotta save more people. Help me pick her up, Matt.”
We pull Z outside, and I whistle sharply. A horse comes running on the water, Arion, a skids to a stop at my feet. I tell him in horse to bring Z back to the Evers. I lay her on top of Arion, and Arion rides off to the Evers.
We go back inside and try to find a way to go up to the top level. There are grooves in the wall like a ladder, so we use that. The both of us slide a loose floor tile on the floor of the School Master’s apartment, and we climb into the room.
Comment by Olive in the Tower on October 11, 2014
To: Everyone
I am the great-grand daughter of Wendy Darling,and daughter of Moira Darling (now Greengrass) and Ossian Greengrass, a warlock. When I was 12 I went to Hogwarts where I was sorted into Slytherin like my sister, Daphne.Every night I dream t of Peter Pan. My mother always told my sister and I that Peter would come and take one of us. I knew it would be me since Daphne did not believe like I did. Then one night a shadow appeared onto one of the walls in my Slytherin dormitory under the Black Lake.
I assumed it was Pan immediately and it quickly snatched me and we evaporated into the walls where we flew over lands unfamiliar to me. Immediately I knew this was not Neverland. He took me into his tower and told me this:”You are nor Evil nor Good. It intrigues me.” So he locked me into a room below his, and told me that if I helped him, he would send me back to my family. I agreed. But, I didn’t know that our “Agreement” would mean so long. I’ve been locked away for 32 years, not aging and hardened by my lost. Waiting for the day that I would return, I came to the sudden realization that Draco, my betrothed, was probably old and tired, and already married. And now my friends you’ve learned the truth. I am not an Ever. Or a Never. I am indeed: Working for the School Master. So, I cannot allow you misfits to invade.
P.S. Do you really think that Evelyn was powerful enough to resurrect the School Master? No, I did. I am as you’ve read Evil nor Good, meaning I have the the power of BOTH.
Comment by Astoria G. M. on October 11, 2014
To:Everyone
My POV
“I knew that girl was trouble” I thought, thinking of Astoria, just remembering where I recognized her from. She had visited me and my mother bearing news from the School Master, and my mother had told me all about the School Masters personal servant, Astoria.
“Matt?You still there?”Olive asked me, just after we watched Z ride off with Arion.
“Yeah, sure.”I say focusing “Let’s go.”Then I show her the way I got in the first time: inside the tower. We finally reach the top, tired from the climb.
“Why is the School Master not here?” I wondered, while scanning the chambers. Olive shrugged like she didn’t know.
Just, then I noticed something strange:A shadow that was caste by nothing. “Umm, wasn’t Z the last piggy back rider?” I asked Olive, who was also searching the room.
“I hope so. But, I don’t see the Storian anywhere.” She said occupied by searching.
“Well, uh-Ok.”I said shaking off the shadow that was now gone. I went back helping to search for the Storian. It was strange neither the School master was here nor the Storian.
Comment by Matt on October 11, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Z
I watch with dotted vision as the lake passes by. I am on a horse. I don’t know how I got on it in my condition, nor if Olive knows that Melisa and I were just walking to the dorms and were kidnapped. I also don’t know if they will find her. I told Matt to look for her, but they will be busy. My head pounds. I have a fever. I black out once more, hoping the horse will find the way.
To: Everyone (not rp)
What do your rp selves look like?
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 11, 2014
To:Everyone
Astoria’s first POV
I slithered stealthily out of the shadows, cloaked in a dark green cloak that had hidden me while Matt and Olive had looked for the Storian.
“Well, well, well. I didn’t expect to see you two here.”I said like I had practiced but changed about five seconds ago. “Well, actually I did.” I laughed cherishing the surprised looks on Olive and Matt’s faces as they realized someone else was there too.
“W-why are you here?” Matt stammered while Olive stepped back.
“Why, Matty, dear? Because I live here!” I informed the two frozen statues ‘Jack Frost must have come by’ I thought. “It was so sweet of you two to come visit me.”I advanced to them and Olive stepped back more. “But, sadly it won’t be friendly”
“We thought you were with us.”Olive said.
“Well, actually I knew before.”Matt told Olive from the corner of his mouth. Olive shot him an ugly look. “Oh don’t bother telling me.” She said sarcasticly.
“If you two are one with your touching argument…”I said interfering. “How sweet, young love.Ever and Never. Must be going for the Sophie and Tedros movement?”I said tauntingly. “But, anyway’s…Since you two are here to KILL The School Master, I’m saddened to say, but, I must kill you two, or send you somewhere you’ll never be found.”I mused, just as I lunged to cast a spell. They were frozen not realizing. I muttered a incantation and my finger burned dark Green, I pointed it to Olive and all different shades of green blasted from my finger, illuminating the room. I watched almost gleefully as the spell headed straight for Olives chest. “Haha. No prince to save you now, Ever.”
Comment by Astoria G. Malfoy on October 11, 2014
My dagger burns through the ice and I have enough time to dodge the green flash coming towards my chest. My silver ring glows and inflicts pain on Astoria with a flick of my wrist. She falls to the floor.
I got to free Matt, and melt away the ice surrounding him. He coughs a lot, and I look into his eyes concerned for his well being.
“We’re–we’re not in love.” I tell Astoria. I hate myself. The butterflies in my gut betrayed my words.
Astoria rolls her eyes and shoots another spell at Matt and I, and I push us both to the floor, to save Matt from getting zapped. The wall behind us is in ruins. Another zap and the whole wall would be disintegrated.
“What you don’t understand,” I inhale sharply. The toxic air after the zap wasn’t helping me at all. “Is that the heart is more powerful than anything else in the world. Including evil. I’m going to prove that to you even if I die trying. Because I know, I die and Matt is still alive, he might actually do something productive.” Matt gives me a sideglance.
“Beautiful speech Ever–” Astoria starts.
“You’d be surprised how many times I’ve heard THAT in the last month.” I mutter.
Astoria grunts in aggravation. “You will pay the price!” She points her finger at my head.
“And we’re going now.” Matt says.
“For once, I agree with you.” I push Matt over the ledge of the tower. He probably thinks I’m a lunatic. Great. Just delightful.
I whistle sharply again. “Adios, sucker!” And I push myself off the edge.
Matt and I land on Arion. He rides off towards the Never towers, and I can hear Astoria screaming something. Most likely something such as, “I will get you my pretty, and you’re little Matty too!” The thought made me smile, but another thing struck my mind. There was a secret I was hiding from everyone.
I was a daughter of Zues, not Mulan. And I had the lightning shaped scar on my arm to show it.
Comment by Olive in the Tower on October 12, 2014
To:Everyone
My intriguing POV
I lunged myself in front of Olive just as the spell almost hit her. Luckily I had a protection shield on, but it still shook when the spell hit. I hit the floor, noticing Astoria’s surprised face. I smiled. Nothing like a wannabe villain getting sabotaged. Weakly I lifted myself from the floor.
“Ivy, What are you doing here? This is me and Matt’s mission!” Olive chastened me, while I noticed that Astoria was gone. “Excuse me for saving your butt.”I told her while using Matt’s hand to lift me up.
“Umm, Guys what happened to Astoria?” Matt wondered.
“I don’t know but,”Olive turned to me. “Why are you here again?”
“I’ve been here along,”I sighed. “Can none of you sense a cloaking spell?”
“Whatever, but you have to leave immediately.”Olive demanded prissy.
“Umm, I just saved your life, and this is how you repa-” I stopped just as two shadows appeared on the towers window sill. Matt and Olive turned with me. And I could tell they both knew who the shadows belonged to.
To:Z
I look like The Evil Queen(My Mother) My hair is long, straight, and black hair, with cold silver eyes and elfish features.
P.S. Everyone I need what you look like so I can make a trailer.
Comment by Ivy Rose on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
Matt looked at me with those eyes that could peer into you and see what you were hiding. I hated him for that. Can I now hide anything from this guy?
“You ok?” He asked.
“Umm, actually something’s been bugging me psychic Matt. I’m not an Ever.”
He looked confused. “So you’re a Never?” I gave him a glance like, Dude you’re really acting like an idiot right now.
“I’m a daughter of Zues. God of the sky and lightning, and Lord of the universe. That kind of stuff.”
“You make that sound like it’s not a big deal. And you’re telling me this now? Prove it.”
I role up my sleeve to show a glowing lightning scar, the symbol of my dad. I hear something…And I feel a pang in my head.
“We have to go back. Ivy and Melisa are in trouble.”
Comment by Olive on Arion on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
I don’t know what happen. First, we’re riding on that horse, then we’re in a dark glen kickin’ messed up never butt. I feel better after the ride across the lake. “So, are you two an item?” I ask Matt and Olive, giggling. “This could not be a worst time,” Olive says, glaring at me. “Let’s go, ladies,” Matt says, staring at us like we were aliens. We run off into the woods, unaware of what’s next.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Z (Pov cont.)
As we slow to a walk, Olive offers to scout ahead. “See you guys in a minute!” She said, and then dashed off. Matt and I walk in an awkward silence. “Thanks for saving me,” I say, to make it less weird. “You’re welcome,” he replies, and the silence settles again. “You know about Olive?” I look at him, his black clothing drowning in the moonlight. “Yeah, she told me. She said she’d never told anyone, though. How did you know?” He looked like he was gazing into my soul. “Like my mom, I can see through that kind of stuff, you know, the kind covering up the tat.” Olive comes running back. “RUN”
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To Everyone
From: Melisa
My mind is swirling round like I’ve boarded a boat on water. I can’t keep straight. My body is paralysed, surrounded in darkness. All five of my senses are useless. I can no longer find a way out of here, no scent, no touch. I can’t taste the blood in my mouth, but whose? No hearing. However every now and then visions of present day slip through my mind. Matt and Olive on their mission (Molive, or Malive?). They saved Z, I am grateful. AESX4 thank you. Williowind, ivy rose, Astoria I see what you’ve done. Trapped in a glass coffin, I see, not with my eyes, Olive has witnessed danger, I beg her to run. So she does.
How have I become an important piece to this game?
Quick, Z, somebody!! I don’t know how to get myself out of here. I don’t. I’ve tried, but what talents have I got besides my katana and my gun?!!!! By the way I’ve heard Jack is flying round in a ship somewhere.
(Wow, whilst I was sleep everyone continued on with the rp. You’re all so amazing at writing!!! I hope this continued it on well. And thanks for not forgetting me!!):)
Comment by Melisa in a glass coffin. on October 12, 2014
To: All
Meanwhile in The School Master’s Private Quarters
“This is a disgrace to the School” she said as a tall familiar girl burst into the SM’s room. ” Astoria, dear. Always knock… These little Evers and Nevers cannot defeat Us” the cloaked character said out of the shadows.
They both sat down at a white marble table where afternoon tea suddenly appeared. “Anyhow, I have a mission for you. It’s quite dangerous but I know you can handle it… To stay in control, I need Rumpelstiltskin’s dagger.” The School Master said calmly as he sipped on Earl Grey.
“What? No! I almost died last time I went to the Enchanted Forest. Peter is still not convinced I’m dead. He’ll find me this time…I know it.” Astoria said defiantly.
“Darlin-” Don’t call me that” Astoria cut off the masked boy. “Fine. I need the dagger and that’s final. Don’t argue with me, Storie… We both know what happened last time”. Astoria looked back at the smirking boy. “When do I leave?” the golden brown hair girl asked.
“Tomorrow. Remember not to talk to strangers”. The School Master smiled mischievously as the two cloaked characters vanish.
Comment by a fly on the wall on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
I am unconscious. I can feel someone begging me to wake up, but this dream is important. The room is dark, but I can hear voices.
“Go get Rumplestilsken’s dagger…”
“I nearly died last time!!…”
I walk over to the corner of the room where a light flash had me curious. It was only a dream. I couldn’t die. I see Melisa surrounded by glass. She pounds it in hopelessness, with no one to save her–
Yet.
Comment by Olive in the Tower on October 12, 2014
From- willowwind
To- all RP people
Ok I’m just going to recap what’s happened so far,
Olive and Matt set out on their quest.
They find an unconscious Z somewhere near the SM tower. Olive and Matt climb up, somewhere (and somehow?) Melissa is locked in a glass coffin and can’t see or hear. When in the tower Olive and Matt are taunted by Astoria who then try’s to kill/maim Olive. At the last second Ivy rose dashes in and saves olive. She informs them she has been there all along. In the confusion Astoria disappears. Ivy rose goes to look for her and willowwind silently follows her. Ivy takes a wrong turn and eventually fights willowwind, willowwind takes a blow to the head from a spell and as Ivy rose walks over, she stabs her in the eye with her pen. They both go unconscious and somehow disappear. Down below Olive informs Matt that she is really the son of Zeus and above Astoria is sent into the woods to find rumplestilkskins dagger.
Comment by Willowwind on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
We slam ourselves against the School Master tower as Astoria runs out, in search of a dagger. I filled Matt and Z in on my dream, and My plan:
“Ok, so since I found Melisa, I’ll go up there–” I say.
“Are you crazy?” Matt hisses. I look at him like, I’ve got this, ok?
“Anyway, I will fly up there–explanation later–and start a storm. I’ll zap whoever’s up there, take Melisa and go.
“You’ll need backup.” Matt tries to convince me to let him go.
“The last time I had backup, the both of you got nearly killed. I’m not risking that again.” I walk over the place where I’m goin To fly.
“You sound like a prince,” Z says.
I look back at her. “No, I sound like a daughter of Zues.” I say smiling.
I hope for good luck, and I start the storm.
Comment by Olive on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: MHD
2 days in the future
my POV
Me and the knave had just sneaked out of Prince Char’s castle with enough food to last for days.
“One day, I’m going to have enough money to never leave my castle” the Knave said as we walked down a deserted path in the Enchanted Forest. “One day, I will find my father and then we willl live happily ever after.” I said as we both noticed a tall girl about 14 or 15 walking straight towards us in a dark green cloak that covered most her face. “Who’s that?” dark haired boy next to me asked. “I dont know…But she looks familiar.” We both shut up immediately as the girl past us. We could see she was very pretty with dark blonde hair with golden and brown highlights and blue/grey eyes,,,But thats about all we could see as we watched her cloak turn to Periwinkle blue as she turned the corner and vanished.
“Blimey…that was weird.” the knave said as we started to walk the way the mysterious girl had come.
Only to find a glass coffin in the middle of a clearing.
Comment by Grace in the Enchanted Forest on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
The storm distracts the School Master, Sophie and The Storian as I fly up. I zap all of them. I check their pulse, make sure they’re dead. They are. I had finished my intended mission. Just for good measure, I turn them all to dust with sword and use wind to scatter them throughout the world. Astoria’s employer would be no more. I look over in the corner–
But Melisa isn’t there.
Comment by Olive in the Tower on October 12, 2014
To: EVERyone
From: Him
POV
It is always best to make your enemies think they are more powerful than you.
As the daughter of Zeus raged the storm outside I quickly put as spell on Sophie and I to stop our pulse. The demigod quickly “zapped” us. And just for good measures sliced us with her sword…Sophie evaporated to Wonderland as I landed in the Enchanted Forest right outside of Rumpelstiltskin’s golden castle.
Comment by The School Master on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Him
I find Astoria walking about in the woods surrounding the castle, and anger fules me. I walk up to her with my finger glowing.
“You have failed me. I’m better off doing this myself And crushing those puny Evers.”
“Master, I can explain–” And I turn her to nothing. She never deserved to be on the mission. I snarl and walk away, and look for Rumplestilsken’s dagger.
(Please note: the author of this section doesn’t agree with the SM. It is from his perspective, not mine.
Comment by The School Master on October 12, 2014
To:Everyone
What happened to me and WW:
I stood in front of a human size mirror, just as Willowwind appeared beside me. Her face was contorted in fury;I laughed.
“Sweet,Willow, how many times can you be fooled?” I said maniacally, while she didn’t say but a word;but I could tell she was silently talking inside her head. “You really thought I would risk my life for an Ever?” I spat, while Willowwind backed away. My long cloak and dress flowed as my true appearance showed.
“I was here all along.”I started my villain speech. “Controlling my clone from here. My Magic Mirror helped. You see it can tell the future some times, if it’s predictable. You my dear Villain, was predictable. So, my body lay’s on the desolated castle floor, inside the tower. Except it’s not my body at all. And now all I have to do to rule is: Keep you here, and keep Jack the poor “Snow Bee” trapped inside a barrel of fire in the Enchanted forest.”
Willowwind was barely stunned, just then she spoke:
“Here?Where exactly is Here?”She asked
I smiled in pleasure.
“Why, it’s the wonderful place of Oz.”
To:Everyone
Can we stop doing PJO crossovers, please? It’s weird.
Comment by Ivy Rose on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
I come back to Matt and Z, and tell them. The School Master, Sophie and the Storian are dead, and Melissa is missing.
“So what now?” Z asks.
I whistle sharply again, and I think Matt is starting to catch on.
“We find her.” He says. I smile and we mount Arion.
We ride off into the Woods, because Arion seems to know where She is, oddly enough. We find her in a glass coffin just like the dream, but this time, she’s not awake. We open the coffin and we ride off with her on my lap until we reach the tower again. All of us dismount. I put Melisa on Arions back, and send her off to the Evers.
It starts to rain. We rush inside the tower. The rain is odd, almost freezing cold. We sit close together in a circle, with my back facing the rest of the tower.
Then I feel something. A freezing blade up against the back of my neck. I breath in deeply. I hug the two others, acting as a human shield for them. A tear trickles down my cheek. “I’m sorry,” I whisper. “For everything.”
Comment by Olive on October 12, 2014
To Everyone
from Melisa within a glass coffin
Nymphs circled the glass coffin. Whispers of a prophecy spill from their lips, “a prince-” they paimt what’s to come in a book, “she needs a prince.” A maiden within a glass coffin armed with a katana is useless as a wound at her heart leaks blood and her pale skin is frozen. “A prince-”
Comment by Melisa on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
They don’t listen to me when I say The SM is not dead. But I saw charm over Sophie and himself. Olive helped us free Melisa, but even she won’t listen. “I’m telling you, he’s not dead,” I say (for about the tenth time) as we sit down for lunch at school.
“I killed him my self!” Olive says, glaring at me.
“Guys, calm down,” Melisa and Sarah Rose say together. You can tell this happens a lot.
“Should we invite Matt over?” Melisa says. He’s all alone in the corner. “He helped save me, and you two are friends with him.”
“Fine, maybe he’ll tell her he’s still alive,” I say
“Or that he’s dead,” Olive growls.
“Or that he’s in between!” Sarah Rose says, smiling. You can tell she just wants us to smile also. When no one does, she stands up and walks over to get Matt. We watch as they have a long talk, in which they each turn bright red a least once. Finally they walk over, and Olive whispers to me: I though she’d never do it.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To Everyone
from Melisa
Again she has gone: the frozen maiden in the coffin returns back to the Darkness from which it was made of. Only when it comes to the end will this coffin bring both together. Whatever that may be?
To Everyone else
so has anyone seen Jack lately? He’s been busy with a rebellion but i don’t know how it’s going you know I’m in a coffin and all?
Comment by Melisa on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Astoria
I wake up in a forest that I had seen many times in my dreams of Neverland. He had sent me to Peter Pan. As I started to walk, I thought about how The SM had said once he kissed Sophie, I would be sent to my hearts desire immediately and free from my bonds.
The Kiss of true evil was supposed to fix it all. Why did it not work? I never want to think about that masked kidnapper again i think as I turn around to find bows notched with arrows surrounding me.
Comment by Astoria on October 12, 2014
To those that live beyond
from the Nymphs
she’s dressed in a crimson cloak. Hair a soft dark blonde in gentle wringlets framing her face. Eyes a frozen night blue. Beware. Beware. The maiden’s stare. Though she is blind she sees with her mind, like a mirror.
Comment by Nymph on October 12, 2014
To those who were fooled
don’t you see this Melisa you thought were freed was just a fragment of her mind. An illusion my I say. Still she is trapped only till this tale concludes will she be free from her senseless curse.
Comment by Nymphs on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
(By the way, I’ve been a demigod all along. And if you’re doing Oz SGE cross over, I think I can do a PJO crossover.)
POV:
I hug Matt and Z closer. Z, like a sister (and the AESX4 people also feel like sisters to me), and Matt, gods Matt…I’m not sure at this point how I feel about him. Yes, I know I like him…but honestly, I just don’t know. I guess I’ll have to hear from him first (cough Matt your cue..)
Just when I think that I’m done for, I hear the dagger fall, and I feel–
I scream. On the way down, the dagger had cut part of my back. It hurts…
The School Master is gone. Smoke and ashes are all that’s left in his place. Gone forever. NO COMING BACK.
And everything goes black.
Comment by Olive on October 12, 2014
TO: All
From the One you fear
Sometimes, I wish my anger wouldn’t get the best of me. I truly missed that lost girl…But oh well, Shell be happier anywhere away from her masked kidnapper. Girls hearts are so soft to bend and break.
I glided towards the castle knowing I would face one of my own…But, I had an advantage.
I am Pure Evil.
Comment by The School Master on October 12, 2014
To Olive
From the Melisa
“Olive, olive. Listen to me, sister, you’ve been tricked. Listen. Time is rare when contacting through a mirror. The me you’ve believed to have freed. It’s an honest trick. The School Master you thought to have killed was only one form of him. The same as me. Still, I am trapped in the glass coffin. The nymphs speak of a prince as the solution. But whom is the question!! Now awake, peacefully. Matt is worried for you! Sister, I only Trust you and our other two in this message. Now, go!!”
Comment by Melisa on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From Z
I open my eyes and find my self back in the present. Olive’s bleeding awfully, Matt’s bending over her, and tears are streaming down my face. I hold Olive’s cold, pale one, and Matt’s warm, also pale one, giving both them and myself hope. One of my tears hits Olive’s back, healing a small part of the wound. I let go of her hand. Another tears hits her, but this time it does nothing. I clasp her hand again, and where ever my tears land, she is healed. Slowly, she sits up.
“Ow,” she says.
“What did you do, Z?” Matt says. Everyone in the circle has dropped hands, and Matt takes a couple steps back.
“I don’t know,” I say. This is starting to get scary.
“I’ve only seen this done once…” Olive says.
“By whom?” Matt and I ask together.
“Peter, I think was his name. Or Johnson, something like that. But that was years ago, so I don’t remember…” she smiled at us, and shakily stood up.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To: Olive
I’m not a demi god, but my mom was one. Annabeths and Percy kid, and that’s why I’m smart. I can control water, but it is always a mistake. I can only do small things also. Like glue something to the water or heal myself and sometimes other. Sorry if you think I’m copying you, but I was going to Posidon be my father, but then you made Zeus your dad, and had to do that instead.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To:Everyone
In Oz:
I stood for a second as Willowwind realized where she was. Then I snapped my fingers and chains encased Willow;I smiled. Her pure Evil?Not even possible.
“It was nice to have a chat with you, nut, I must be going.”I told her already dissapearing. “Don’t worry you won’t be able to get out Oz, only pure Evil can. Which you are not. And besides my Mother knew the Wicked Witch of the West, and I asked her a little favor. Not to allow you to leave.” Then Willow’s completely shocked and helpless face disappeared. “Now, then,”I muttered to myself, arriving in the Endless woods just outside of Good and Evil towers.”I think it’s about time for the Evers and Matt to pay for what they have done.”
To: Olive
Oz is a fairy-tale, and can you just be able to summon thunder and lighting instead of being Zeus’ daughter, and just have Arion be like Matt’s horse from a gift from his mother to be the fastest horse in all the lands? That would fit a lot better. And besides you can’t be my sister.
Comment by Ivy Rose on October 12, 2014
From- willowwind
To- everyone
My POV
so apparently we were in OZ. Classic. A clone. How many times have I seen it before? But really she was very foolish. “it was the perfect hideout, you see no one pays attention to these places” she smiled. “So your counting your self as no one?” I ask. “I am someone” ivy hissed, “you’ve seen that countless times” I smiled “have I now? Last time I checked you were hiding behind a shadow” she glared daggers at me. “It was effective” she said. “But a cheat” I countered, “then again cheating is want I live for.” I smiled. This was the last part of my plan. “I can see a fight coming up” I said spontaneously. “Really?” Ivy said sarcastically. “So can you go easy on me? My head still hurts” ivy looked shocked. “Really?” She said. “Haha no” I said. “Do your worst, if you can catch me” and with that I shattered the mirror with a pair of scissors, threw a dart at ivy, saluted her and jumped out the window.
Comment by Willowwind on October 12, 2014
Arion dashes towards us (which by the way, is like 70mph). He stops and I mount him.
“Where are you going?” Z asks.
“I’m going to find a prince.” I reply. “And a change of clothes.” I finger the silk dress.
“We’re coming with you.” Z and Matt say in unison.
I sigh and and close my eyes. Hey dad, we need a mode of transportation–
A horse nuzzles my hand that isn’t Arion (trust me, Arion doesn’t do that kind of stuff.) I look down at it, and I see two pegasi, on black one blue.
“Well if you guys really wanna come, there you go.” Matt gets on the black one and Z on the blue Pegasus.
We ride together, Arion going at a normal rare for a horse. I start to sing my favorite song, Born For This by Paramore.
Alright so you think you’re ready?
Then say it with me go
We were born for this!
Matt and Z sing along too, and everything is happy like School For Good and Evil Musical, until we reach the Ever Castle.
We dismount. I draw my dagger and run into the sword training room. I intercept Chaddick’s fight and He and I end up going one on one. I block each one his jabs, and I end up with a sword at his throat.
“Hey Chaddick, I need you to kiss someone for me.”
“Wait what? Who are you anyway?” He asks in confusion.
“Hold on.” I run into the girls locker room and Chang into my normal attire. Black converse, leather jacket, jeans, and My lucky bandana.
Chaddick is talking with Z, both of.them smiling and looking like tomatoes. Matt is standing by himself, looking sort of lonely.
I look up at him with concern. “You ok?”
He clears his throat and looks away. “Yeah.”
“You’re not.” I observe.
“I will explain later…” he says. I’m not one to pry, so I let it pass.
“You guys ready?” They nod and we walk outside. We mount our horses.
“I’m driving.” Says Z.
Chaddick whines. “It’s my manly right!!” Z rolls her eyes and spurts her Pegasus. Craddick lets out a girly scream and we all bust up laughing. When it subsided, we were ready.
“Whoever’s last is a rotten egg!”Z suggests. We don’t wait. We speed off towards Melisa, this time ready for anything.
Comment by Olive on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Z
Chaddick is driving me crazy. I think he likes me, but I don’t feel the same about him. The only boy I could ever even think about liking is Matt, and that’s because we are friends. I also feel like something in the sky is trying to strangle me, but I don’t what. Maybe I’ll ask Olive. I want to go back to the future in a vision, but I can’t force those. I close My eyes and hope one comes.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To Z
You can have Chaddick. I know I sound stupid, especially in my situation, but I’ll be having strange thoughts for weeks. Anyways you might learn to like him. Like Olive and Matt doing a Sophie- Tedros move. Smart.
Ps- I’ve never kissed a boy.
Comment by Melisa on October 12, 2014
To: Melisa
I don’t want him. You are getting saved by him: you get him. There problem solved
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To Anyone
Okay, wait a minute…Chaddick!!? Okay, he’s saving my life and I’m sounding really rude right now, but kissing him is the equivalent to sleeping in the same room as Hort. I’m sorry, but still!! It’s Chaddick!! (Sigh— the real reason is that I’ve never been kissed by a boy and after this I’m gonna have to face him everyday at school so it’s gone be INCREDIBLY awkward and stuff…)
Comment by Melisa in and out of role play on October 12, 2014
To:Everyone
Prince Char had just finished his long journey from the glend of the elves, when he noticed a Glass Coffin in a clearing.He thought at first it was Snow White’s sanctuary but then saw a young girl with gold hair inside. This was not Snow White
Comment by prince Char on October 12, 2014
To Everyone
How bout this everyone: we stop adding stuff about PJO, but keep what we have so far because it’s hard to change the story right now.
To: Matt
You are like the only person we haven’t heard from, so, what does your rp self look like?
Oh, and who said you cried?
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To Anyone
Blocking out the many question of Chaddick, Z fell asleep. How whilst on the back of a horse, she didn’t know. In her dreams a familiar figure stepped from the many folds of darkness. “Sister, how is battle going?”
“We’re bringing Chaddick along. You know so you and him can-” Z brought the tips of her two fingers together. “Chaddick!!” At her reaction Z giggled. “Yup.” The figure flushed, “well if it’s of the Nymph’ s prophecy we should be successful. But how can you be sure it is he they talk about?” Z thought hard of a reply. Olive had chose him at random. Matt just went along with it. “We’ll have to try, though. It’s your life at stake.”
The figure replied, “of course. But it may not work.”
With an invisible force pushing her Z jolted in her place among the darkness. “I have to depart now, sister. Good luck with the kiss!!” She joked, stepping through a fold of darkness. “Z!!” The figure stopped Z. As she turned, two ghostly hands came together mastering the shape of a heart, “Molive forever?!!”
“I know right?!!” She scoffed as she left.
Comment by Melisa on October 12, 2014
Friends Torn Apart by feuds related to the heart
In a fairytale There’s always Good and Evil but in this tale there’s something Medieval.
Watch out for fire and ice
Don’t make me warn you twice
Comment by The Storian on October 12, 2014
To Everybody
Okay we’ll stop the pjo thing like Matt said. And when did Matt cry? If you people are gonna argue….please don’t. Who’s being Prince char, you’re making me laugh, but what the heck so random!!:)and Chaddick better not be a sloppy kisser…eergh the visions!!
Comment by Melisa on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
I wake up and look around. My eyes stop on Matt. He looks different, and that’s bad. Years ago, my mom told me of something written about me by the storian. That one day my friend and I would fall in love with the same person. This was not good.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To:Everyone
I lifted the glass from the coffin, but, just then a voice behind me said:
“She has to have a prince rescue her from her enchantment.True Loves Kiss.”Startled I turned around and saw about 10 nymphs dressed flowing robes, and hair braided into cascading braids. I bowed like a prince should, but the one who spoke-the leader I presumed- gestured for me to stand.
“We have taken care of her, but, nothing but a Prince’s True Love Kiss may wake her.” the main nymph sighed coming to me.
“I am prince Char.” I told her
“I know who you are.” She smiled back
“How?” I asked politely as I could, when someone just told me they knew who I was.
“Because you are the one to awake her.”
Comment by Prince Char on October 12, 2014
“So who’s the chic I’ve got to snog?!!” Chaddick was seriously winding Z up on purpose now. “For the one millionth time. It’s Melisa and you’re not goin to be snogging her, you’ll just give her a gentle kiss…” She breathed in slowly, then out. Matt found it hard to contain his laughter. He really wasn’t trying hard to impress Olive. “But you said she was trapped in some glass coffin. Like Snow White, except without the Apple and stuff.” Z facepalmed herself, “oh God’s. Take me now and place me in a glass coffin except I have the choice to go in and out.”
“So you want me to SNOG her!!?”
Matt scoffed. A little too much, as mucus poured from his nose.
Nevers.
Comment by Melisa on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
Well I thought I’d complete my bio. After I killed the Snow Queen, I was found by the Queen of Hearts and she took me in. I split my time between Wonderland and the North Pole. She taught me croquet, to behead people, and many other life lessons. I have very pale skin, white hair, and my left eye is a pale blue. The eyeglass shard I have instead of my right eye glows red. I have a mask of ice that covers the right side of my face and I have a very pale red heart painted around my left eye. I wear very light, very unbulky armour of ice, and my skin, armour and hair are completely covered in frost. I either dual wield swords or use an axe, because axes are good for beheading people. I am able to use most weapons and I make my weapons out of ice right before I fight with them.
Comment by Warlord Jack on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
(Ok, no more PJO we’ll go back yo my mom being Mulan)
We stop at the glass coffin, where a guy has removed the top and is leaning over Melisa.
I dismount and run over to the guy. I pull his cloak back jerking him back. “Woah there chief. What do you think you’re doing?”
He bows. “I’m Prince Char. With all do respect madam, I am trying to save this damsel in distress.”
“Two things, Chared Snobby Pants. One, if you call me madam again, there’s a good chance that I will impose you with something. Two, we have a prince already….” I see a nymph glaring down at me.
“I’m gonna shut up now.” I say.
The nymph nods and tells me about the plan.
Comment by Olive on October 12, 2014
To Anybody (back in rp)
I can hear voices: Olive’ s and someone else’s of whom I’ve never crossed paths with. Have I? If Olive hadn’t arrived in time what would have this unidentified stranger.
To:Jack
JACK YOU GAVE IT AWAY!NOW I KNOW WHO DIES!thank you Mr. Snow bee
P.S. WHAT THE RED HEART IS A SNOW BEE?!?!?!?
P.S.S. Puh-lease The queen of hearts was weak all she had was an army no magic, what could you have learned from her? How to cut someone’s head off the right way?Btw They were both defeated if you’ve read the original versions. Not the OUAT. And the Evil Queen was never defeated, My little Snow Bee. You may be able to summon ice, but that is all you can do. Darkness cannot be defeated. It’s not possible. As soon as light fades, Dark rules. Remember this, my Snow Man.
To:Z
You should. he’s annoying
Comment by Ivy Rose on October 12, 2014
To:Everyone
I had to sleep, and go to a Chocolate Bar in Hansel and Gretals village, sorry.
POV
My eyes drooped. My arms shivered. And my legs ached barely able to carry me. I could barely believe it was only a hour ago when I told Olive, Z, and the Evers I would leave. Olive and Z both argued to go with me, and I caved. So in the middle of the night before we were supposed to leave I snuck off. They would probably just notice I was gone. The Endless forest was unnervingly quiet as I walked along the path. I had met no dangers, except a lake of Crocs who had not bothered me, being a boy. But this was more unsettling then being a attacked left and right. A rustling of leaves from a nearby bush, made me jump as I jogged. I stared for a moment, then advanced. Not sure if this was brave or just stupid.
To:Jack
Jack, really? You’re doing a rebellion? That means I’m gonna have to kill you. I don’t want to do that. Maybe…And I’ve visited the Queen of Hearts castle. There was an execution, and you cried. And the Queen of Hearts doesn’t do adopted sons if you’ve read the lewis carrol version which I have.And the Snow Queen is not that powerful.I really don’t know why I’m backing up Ivy Rose.
Comment by Matt on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From Z POV
I jump out of a bush up the path and tackle Matt.
“You really think you can sneak away from a soothsayer? I’m coming with you, no matter what you pull.” I get up and wipe the dirt from my hands.
“Dude!” Matt yells. “I know you and Olive are in love with me, but you can’t follow me.”
“I’ve been waiting here for half an hour. Also, I only did this as a friend. If you die out here, I would have to wait till I died to say I told you so.” I smirk at him.
“Fine you can come. As long as Olive doesn’t tackle-” Olive flies out of the bushes and lands on him.
“Doesn’t tackle who?” I ask, giving him a small smile.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
“Hi Matt!” I say giving him a nuggie. I flash a peace sign when I’m up. I help him up, and notice he’s shivering. “Here,” I say, giving him my leather jacket. He raises an eyebrow at me and I assure him I’m not cold. I pull on a loose red sweater. I give him the bow an arrows, since I’m not that good at opperating it. I draw my dagger and Z unsheathes her sword.
Z has a smug smile on her face. “Let’s go kick some monster butt.”
Comment by Olive on October 12, 2014
To Z:
You mean poor.
To: Everyone
My POV
“It seems winter is coming early.” Winds howled, Snow was two meters deep on the ground. There was no liquid water in the school, they had all became ice. It was -25 degrees. And my minions were coming. The Snow Bees swarmed all over the school. Ice monster after ice monster and snow monster after snow monster was being created. And a tower of ice was appearing among the Never towers. “Time for a game of croquet vermin!”
Comment by Warlord Jack on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Z
My silver tank top wasn’t the best thing to wear, and I’m starting to regret it.
“We aren’t looking for those cloning things, are we?” I say. I hate those things.
“Yeah, we are,” Matt says.
“Great,” I do jazz hands, jokingly.
“You’re not scared, are you?” He seems kind of concerned.
“No, just not prepared,” I shrug.
“Don’t worry, we’ll do fine,” Olive says, and she grabs my hand. Gosh, she’s like a sister to me.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 12, 2014
POV
I had been kidnapped for the Second time in my life!
All around me was only darkness. I open up my eyes to see that I am in a tree house. My head is pounding. I know this is my fate, but I feel something pulling me back towards the cursed tower where I learned most of the things I know today. No matter how hard the School Master tries, He can never get rid of me. Because, I know his darkest secret.
I know his name.
Comment by Astoria in Never Neverland on October 12, 2014
To:Z
My mum my made me take a bath, Since I had soccer today, so that I could watch Once upon a time tonight. Ugh. How dare she make the all powerful Matt take a dreadful bath.
POV
“Somehow I’m not surprised, that you two are here.” I shrugged as Olive, Z and I trotted along the path. Z smiled and shook her up and down
“Yep. No surprises here.” She grinned.
I rolled my eyes, kiddingly.
“Ok,”I started. “This is the plan: First we find what’s been cloning us, second we find Ivy;She’s the only one who can defeat Jack Frost. Normally we could defeat him by ourselves easily, but, this time’s the prophecy has made sure that only Ivy can”Olive and Z considered what I had said.
“Ok, let’s focus on the first:The Clones”Olive decided
“Alright, but, I am NOT being ba-”Z started to say but then was cut off by a thudding of hooves.
“Hide in the bushes!” I whisper-yelled, as Z and Olive dove in the nearest berry bush. I stayed on the path and snapped my fingers. My appearance instantly changed into a old beggar. My mother had taught me how to disguise myself, but only myself, I couldn’t do others at the same time. I waited as the thudding came closer, and then a young man on a pure black horse rode onto the path. He thudded to a stop;And I noticed his uniform. I froze. I recognized the emblem on his coat, to well.
Comment by Matt on October 12, 2014
To; Everyone
From: Olive
POV:
Z, Matt, and I are walking along in the Woods when we hear someone’s voice behind us.
“You thought I was dead. I am hurt Clover.” I wip around. I don’t care now if she called me by my real name anymore.
“Mom?! I thought–what are you doing here?” I am shocked, now I know how my enemies feel when I shock them with my dagger.
“I was exiled here. Remember? And then they reported me dead.” She tells the story of how she was defending herself from Nevers. She motions to have me hug her, and I cry with joy. My mom is alive. I go and hug her, but this time is different than before. She doesn’t embrace me. She draws a sword and traces my back, where I had been cut. She opens the wound again. I scream. I stumble back. I stare at her with hate.
“You are no mother to me. You never were.”
Comment by Olive on October 12, 2014
To:Everyone
My POV
I paced mischief tower watching from a window, Z, the Ever, wander into the Blue forest, and then a half hour later, Matt, the traitor, venture in after, and finally Olive, the triangle of love, run desperately into the woods searching for her suppose to be Prince. I grinned maniacally, as the schools turned to ice. How naive the poor Jack was. He would soon be melted. Melted to dust.The Evers would soon find out the way to destroy him, although I already knew. My mission was simple: Destroy the ice(The easiest part, his magic is nothing) and make the poor wretched souls of Good pay for what they have done. To pay for all they have made me suffer.
To:Soman
Yes, are you only going to put AESX4 in the post? Thanks
Comment by Ivy Rose on October 12, 2014
To:Olive
Ok so mine happens before you meet your mom, ok?Ok
POV
“I am looking for Prince Mattikus” The messenger told Matt disguised as a old man. I gulped at the mention of the name.
“Eh?”I asked pretending even though he heard.
The messenger rolled his eyes
“I-am-looking-for-Prince-Mattikus-as-order-from-his-father”The guard repeated grudgingly.
“Dunno who he is.”I answered starting to walk off from the horse.The man reared the horse to face me.
“Can you at least tell me where a village or civilization is?”He yelled.
“Yeah, sure. just keep going on this path. you’ll find one.”I smiled. “But, I hope you brought your jacket.”
Comment by Matt on October 12, 2014
To: Everyone.
From Z
All of my friend worst night mares are appearing. All to late I realize where we are: The land of Screams. Its like one giant haunted house.
“Guys, don’t listen to them. They want to scare you, make you hate life! Listen to me!” I plead. They both look at me.
“Almna serpusta exilin filan!” Matt yells. Somehow I know it means Vanish, Crummy Scum. The fears vanish.
“We have to leave,” Olive says, and we run. They can’t find my worst nightmare, and I know it. Suddenly, a man block my path.
“Are you ready to come with me daughter?” He says, and he gives me his hand.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 13, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Olive
Matt shoots my mom with his bow. The figure swimmers and turns into a Never General. I nearly barf. I was hugging him? Gross.
Z sits me down digs through my bag for bandages. She finds them and starts to wrap my wound. I am greatful for my new found family, I couldn’t live without them. Literally and figuratively.
I hate myself though. “Why do have to be such an idiot?!” I slam the ground. “We could have just shot the guy in the first place, and this wouldn’t have happened. This all my fault.”
“No it’s not. Why’d did he call you Clover?” Z asks.
“After my mom was claimed dead in the forest, people made fun of me left and right. I usually punched them or told them that my mom was one of the greatest warriors that existed. I was so ashamed that I changed my name to Olive. A lot of the letters in Olive are in Clover too. I’d always wanted to be Olive.
“But I’m still ashamed of her. You can’t find this in books, but Mulan didn’t save the world for her, she saved the world for a Never guy.” I groan as Z does something to my back.
“But you’re different, right?” Matt wonders. He’s doing that thing again where his eyes bore into me, searching for the truth.
“Maybe Jack’s right. Maybe different is evil. I don’t know Matt. I don’t know.”
Comment by Clover/Olive on October 13, 2014
To: Everyone
From Z
(All of this happens before my last post)
“For the record I like Olive better,” I say. Olive smiles. “So, Mattikus, nice name. When were you born, in 380 B.C.? In Rome?” I giggle. Matt glares at me.
“Well, let’s go before mommy dearest comes back,” Olive says. She walks down the path, away from the castle.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 13, 2014
To Matt:
Thanks for the name.
POV
As I was watching the traitor and his Ever friends, from Madness, the tower of ice I had made, I noticed someone, a messenger coming towards the school. I decided to go and wait at the entrance for the messenger. I was feeling bored, after all. I had been playing with my axe as he came into sight. “Want to play croquet, messenger.” In response he only stuttered. “Off with your head.” “Wha-What did I do?” “Off with your head!” And I decapitated him. I froze his head and threw it towards to Ivy with three letters drawn upon it. “DIE”
Comment by Jack Frost on October 13, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Clover
“Z! No!” I scream, but there’s a invisible wall between us. I see Z walking away with her dad. Matt is walking towards me with his hands in a fist, looking ready to fight.
This is my nightmare. My friend da have turned on me, and there is no one to save me. No one but my self. I close my eyes hoping this isn’t real. I open them again. The nightmare is still there.
Matt is pinning me to the invisible wall. His eyes are darker than ever.
“Listen to me Matt.” He doesn’t seem to start listening. My hand finds his face. My other hand unravels the fist and holds it. “Listen Matikus. Can I call you that? Z has been taken by her father. We’re in a place that controls you, by using your weaknesses. You need.To wake up. Wake up Mattikus.” His eyes stare blankly at me. I lean my forehead against his. A tear trickles down my cheek. “Please wake up.”
Comment by Clover/Olive on October 13, 2014
To:Everyone
My story revealed
the Messenger disappeared into the night, and Olive and Z walked out of the bushes leaves in their rustled hair.
“What was that about?”Z asked curiously.
“There’s something I have to tell you guys.” I said, Olive and Z sat down on the side of the path.
“Do tell.” Olive whispered.
“When my mother died, and my father was about to crown Aurora, who had just been awaken, he discovered a law made by one of the past kings. It was this: ‘The eldest child of every royal family must be crowned king even if they were exiled.’My father tried to ignore it, but, a duke of a nearby village made known that my father had another child. He was me. The Duke proclaimed that if I was not crowned the kingdom would go to him. My father tried to argue but the whole kingdom agreed with the duke. My father sent guards to fetch me, and I was brought to him. I was trained to be king but on the night before my coronation, I ran away and found the School for Good and Evil. I picked to be a Never, honoring my Mother.That’s the End”
Comment by Matt on October 13, 2014
To: Everyone
From: Z
My own dad has kidnapped me. He is my night mare. My friends see me walking with him joyfully, but in real life he’s dragging me, and I’m screaming. With one last bit of power, I rip my fathers hands from my arms, and run back to my friends in tears.
“I hate him!” I scream. “I do!”
Matt looks at me. He look scared. He is throwing punches at Olive, so I tackle him. He blinks, and stands up.
“I’m so sorry, Olive,” He says. “I t was like I wasn’t even in control of my own body.”
“Its fine,” Olive replies, but its not. For I know one thing, and its that the fear is taking them over and if we don’t leave soon, it will take me also.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 13, 2014
To:Everyone
My Nightmare
POV
I wouldn’t. I couldn’t. I would never. My nightmare was overwhelming. As I threw the punched I felt out of control. My body taking it’s toll.The face. It was EVIL. I wanted to kill her. Not her it. It’s face was contorted in a wicked smile.
“My dear Mattikus.”It taunted
“Don’t call me that!” I screamed throwing more punches.”I’m not your’s!”
“Oh, but you are.”It maimed. “Just not.” I threw more, but somehow I still did not feel quenched although blood covered it’s face.
“You killed her! Mercilessly! How could I JOIN you!”My voice quivered.
“She was in my way.”It said without flinching from my next throw. “Your Mother was useless to me.”
“So, you killed her!”I screamed
“But, now I need you, Mattikus, I need my Pawn.”
Then I woke from the horrific hallucination,to see Olive pinned in my arms. I quickly backed away, Z had tackled me.
“I-I’m s-so sorry.” I croaked.
I had been punching Olive.
Comment by Matt on October 13, 2014
To: Everyone
I hug matt. Know I shouldn’t, but I do. The fact that he’s safe is overwhelming.
“We have to get out. Now,” I say as we go from a walk to a run to a sprint.
“Um, thanks for the hug, but you let go now,” Matt says. I blush.
“Sorry, just kinda nervous. Don’t want to be stuck he forever, you know,” I try to brush off the awkwardness.
“Z and Matt sittin’ in a tree…” Olive says, giggling.
I glare at her and we pass the boarders out of the Land of Screams.
Comment by Z at AESX4 on October 13, 2014
POV
I have an agreement with one of the demons here. My voice is resounding around the traitor and his ever friends. “Little Mattie, how did you like punching your lady friend? Was it fun? Or was it not? I don’t particularly care either way. Are you wondering who I am? I’d say I was your worst nightmare, but that’s just cliche.” I appeared in front of him. “I’m Jack and I have a proposition for you. You and your Ever friends do something for me and I’ll help you escape. And if you don’t agree, have fun with your nightmares.”
Comment by Jack Frost on October 13, 2014
To:Jack
My nightmare wasn’t you
Comment by Matt on October 13, 2014
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Hey there Lemisa,
Now I know this is a role play but you could work with this to make it something more like a story very easily. You have a good basis here and you'd have all of your dialogue set out. However you'd need to fill in our gaps with some description, action and general prose type words.
Consider your use of abbreviations and your characterisation. We're not feeling a whole lot from your characters right now, partially because the role play format doesn't lend itself to the individual taking on the emotions and actions of a role play character - since they're not written to be read, generally speaking. Developing your characterisation would really boost the interest your reader has in your narrative. We want to be able to involve ourselves in all aspects of your story and really get a feel for the world you're creating around you - an interesting world such as yours deserves that kind of attention! Though you'll have to clear up some of your lore, you're mixing myth and faerytale and real life and such and it gets rather confusing as we go along. Maybe create a character and concept list first and sort out what goes where and why. It feels almost a little like Once Upon a Time, with the different story characters interacting with one another.
I appreciate that you don't want or need reviews on this (perhaps next time, throw it up in a writerfeed pad or your blog) and your other contributors haven't been mentioned as yet. However, I'm totally sold on the idea of your making this into a full novel concept, working with your descriptions, action and characterisation to create a tale which can be engaging and really worth reading.
In any case, good luck with writing and role playing!
- Penguin.
Thanks, maybe in the near future I'll write this into an actual novel/ short story to make it more understandable and less copy and pasted.
Salutations.
Now that the formalities are out of the way, I can say this: Oh my goodness! You do realise how long this is, don't you? I know you said you didn't want any reviews, but sheesh, if you make something this long, you are certainly going to achieve that goal. However, there are diehard reviewers such as I who refuse to leave a work behind, so we must review this work and get it out of the Green Room. But how?
I'll tell you what - I am going to search for some random extract on which to comment, and then I shall write as much as I can about it. You don't really want a review, and frankly, nobody wants to review something this long on Review Day, so that way, you will get a review you won't have to use, and I get the points for my review team as well as get this work one review closer to being freed from the clutches of the Green Room.
O.o I literally scrolled down from the beginning and just stopped at a random spot. And what does my extract happen to be? A recap of what's happened so far. Okay, let's see:
So, this is a role-play you and some friends did? Well, if you want them to know about it, I suggest tagging them or posting on their wall. If they aren't on YWS... well, good luck with that. May your future RPG's be as special to you as this one!
Oh my gosh. You really reviewed this. Thanks!!
No problem!
Is it cool if i just review this once to get it out of the green room? I don't know if this is an piece or what but just tell me if I can okay?
I wouldn't want you to spend too long on a review (especially for something as long this), but you can if you want.
no, i mean like just a random thing and set it as a review. not an actual review. I don't know if you're trying to get reviews on this or what, but if you are... SHORTEN IT
I swear I'm not trying to get reviews on this!!
I uploaded it for personal reasons, but now that's over I don't really need it up. But you could leave a comment, if you want. I don't know. 
wow this was long. For starters it was confusing not knowing the background. Also the abbreviations. Besides that, the story was very cool.
You read it? Like, the whole thing?! Woah. Thanks.