PeanutPhoebe

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! My first thought was "Hmm..." This was really an interesting poem. Sometimes the beat was just a little bit off, and didn't seem to flow well. ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! Awesome job. This is a really good poem. I assume this is based off a real experience? I agree with TheMessenger tho, that stanza that says ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review. Great job on the poem, but it is a little depressing. I know some of our generation is like this, but not all of it!! We, ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! This is a cool idea. I like the beat, it goes pretty well in most places. Some of the rhyming isn't great, it could be improved. ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!!...(again) First off, i really like the way just these two lines and the title go so well together. However, i think it's a little short to ...

PeanutPhoebe, Here to review!! Interesting!! I really like this, although the end is a little sad. I like they way you cross out what you wanted to say. It was ...

Pure awesomeness!! Amazing, amazing, amazing. I love this poem. I think you could have split it up into stanzas, tho. The imagery is really good. The rhyming and beat go ...

Amazing job!! I really like both the rhythm and rhyme, contrary to to what you said in it:) This is so cool. I'm really not that good at poetry, but ...

I love this!! That was amazing... Just the way you describe things is awesome!! I can see it all in my mind. One, no, two things. when you say "our ...

So cute!! Love that it's short and sorta sweet. it really shows the value of life, when you think about it. I don't think that there's much you could do ...

Interesting!! I really like this poem and the story it tells. Is this based on a true story? I think this could use some more description in some places, however. ...

Love this!! The first stanza sounds somewhat similar to what my mom has told me before, she just wasn't quite so harsh:) I like the lines and the way it ...

Love it!! Great job on this. I like the story behind it as well. I really like the beat of this poem, it has a great rhythm. I love the ...

Very interesting!! I loved the way you described this girl's dream for her wedding. Okay, first off, i felt like the beat was off a little. The rhythm just didn't ...

Love this so much!! Couldn't find it till now, sorry, I knew you'd posted it!! Love the fact that I saw you writing this and was there, and knew how ...