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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Reaf

    PeanutPhoebe, here to give a review!! First things first. The title is spelled "Reaf" which I think is supposed to be backwards "Fear" which it is not. I loved the ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Free At Last

    PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! Oh. My. Goodness. I loved this!! You really pull me in. It almost sounds like an extended Negro spiritual, which I LOVE. I ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, Literature Re: A Piano Man

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, you did really good with formatting. I know some people have a lot of trouble with that, so it's good to see not ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Thousand Thoughts

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so first off, the very first thing I noticed was the formatting. I don't know if you had trouble getting it the way you ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: A Twenty YearSleep

    Oh. Wow. I love this...oh yeah... PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so my thoughts on this. I think this was a very interesting short story, one of the most ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Midnight

    PeanutPhoebe here for a review!! I really like this poem. It would have been great if you could have done stanzas, but I understand. I love the simplicity of the ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Historical Fiction Re: Crucifix

    Wow... This is amazing!! First off, I am a Christian as well, and it was encouraging to see this kind of story on here. I LOVE the way you wrote ...

    Oct 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: I Still Miss You

    PeanutPhoebe here for a review!! Okay, so I really like this so much!! Love the meeting, and how he was so enraptured by her even without knowing her... Love all ...

    Oct 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: ​How a waitress's smile saved a life

    PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! Okay, so this piece is amazingly well written. I love the concept and theme that just a simple smile and a few encouraging words can do ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What day is it?

    PeanutPhoebe here to review!! I love this!!;) Sorry I haven't gotten to it until now, I meant to much earlier, but kinda forgot:/ I like the imagery and word color ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Lost Chances

    PeanutPhoebe here for a review. Okay, so this is really a pretty well written piece, but to me it really seems to have no point. All it tells is that ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Saved By His Love

    Love it!! Really like how you used Christ in this. However, Biblically, I do disagree with the last part. You said all you need to do to be saved is ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Remember

    Good job!! I really like this story. Hope you weren't hurt to badly:/ Okay, first off, the rhyming confused me a little bit, because sometimes it works really well, but ...

    Oct 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: A Hunt

    PeanutPhoebe here to review!! So first off, I love your vocab that's descriptive, but not too wordy, it's pretty simple. I like how you set the scene; I could see ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Yes.

    Hey!! So I REALLY like this piece. You wrote this really well. I love the way you manage to describe everything down to a precise point. That is definitely something ...

    Oct 8, 2013


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners