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Re: Reaf
PeanutPhoebe, here to give a review!! First things first. The title is spelled "Reaf" which I think is supposed to be backwards "Fear" which it is not. I loved the ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Free At Last
PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! Oh. My. Goodness. I loved this!! You really pull me in. It almost sounds like an extended Negro spiritual, which I LOVE. I ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: A Piano Man
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! First off, you did really good with formatting. I know some people have a lot of trouble with that, so it's good to see not ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: A Thousand Thoughts
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so first off, the very first thing I noticed was the formatting. I don't know if you had trouble getting it the way you ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: A Twenty YearSleep
Oh. Wow. I love this...oh yeah... PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Okay, so my thoughts on this. I think this was a very interesting short story, one of the most ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Midnight
PeanutPhoebe here for a review!! I really like this poem. It would have been great if you could have done stanzas, but I understand. I love the simplicity of the ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Crucifix
Wow... This is amazing!! First off, I am a Christian as well, and it was encouraging to see this kind of story on here. I LOVE the way you wrote ...
Oct 19, 2013 -
Re: I Still Miss You
PeanutPhoebe here for a review!! Okay, so I really like this so much!! Love the meeting, and how he was so enraptured by her even without knowing her... Love all ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: How a waitress's smile saved a life
PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! Okay, so this piece is amazingly well written. I love the concept and theme that just a simple smile and a few encouraging words can do ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: What day is it?
PeanutPhoebe here to review!! I love this!!;) Sorry I haven't gotten to it until now, I meant to much earlier, but kinda forgot:/ I like the imagery and word color ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: Lost Chances
PeanutPhoebe here for a review. Okay, so this is really a pretty well written piece, but to me it really seems to have no point. All it tells is that ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: Saved By His Love
Love it!! Really like how you used Christ in this. However, Biblically, I do disagree with the last part. You said all you need to do to be saved is ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: I Remember
Good job!! I really like this story. Hope you weren't hurt to badly:/ Okay, first off, the rhyming confused me a little bit, because sometimes it works really well, but ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: A Hunt
PeanutPhoebe here to review!! So first off, I love your vocab that's descriptive, but not too wordy, it's pretty simple. I like how you set the scene; I could see ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Yes.
Hey!! So I REALLY like this piece. You wrote this really well. I love the way you manage to describe everything down to a precise point. That is definitely something ...
Oct 8, 2013
