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Re: Your Heart
Hello, EmPands15! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! I also apologize in advance if my review isn't very helpful. I don't know much about poetry, so ...
Jul 31, 2017 -
Re: I would frown
Hello, Inaayat! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: You format of writing isn't personally one of my favorites. The beginning of each new sentence ...
Jul 28, 2017 -
Re: The job
Hello, midnightmoon! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: Wow! What a story! I really love how you described the people that stuffed the main ...
Jul 27, 2017 -
Re: Sever | Chapter 2: Drop Dead
Hello again, jessegray! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: As I said when I reviewed the prologue of this, you described Kirby's looks straight ...
Jul 27, 2017 -
Re: -Old Blue Eyes-
Hello again, GinaERufo! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! I'm not a fan of poetry, and I know little about it, so sorry if the points ...
Jul 26, 2017 -
Re: Prologue
Hello, AriannaC! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: I first saw the story yesterday in the Novel/Chapter section, but I skipped over it. Why? ...
Jul 26, 2017 -
Re: Sever | Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Hello again, jessegrey! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: I really love the characters' personalities! They're not one-sided, they all seem to have flaws, ...
Jul 26, 2017 -
Re: The Mansion on Darbyshire Hill
Hello, GinaERufo! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: While the idea behind it is super common and cliche in horror stories, this was certainly ...
Jul 25, 2017 -
Re: Sever | Prologue: To Die For
Hello, jessegrey! PastelSlushie here to leave a review! Let's get right into it! Also, welcome to YWS! First comment: I must say, you have talent when you can lure ME ...
Jul 25, 2017 -
Re: The Red Light
Hello, silverlady99! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: While, I did absolutely adore this poem, I feel like this should have a 12+ warning ...
Jul 25, 2017 -
Re: You're Not in Love With Her
Hello again, gxldencrxwns! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: I did find this to be quite enjoyable, but what you interpret as a "relationship" ...
Jul 25, 2017 -
Re: the house of death
Hello, bvbAngel! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: I think everything is happening too fast. I know this is a short story but it ...
Jul 24, 2017 -
Re: Tap, Tap, Tap
Hello, gxldencrxwns! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: I have seen the original post of this on another site, Reddit, I believe. If permission ...
Jul 24, 2017