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PassionateReader

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Telling Lies

    Heyy lonelybug! Here to review cuz I missed review day and I feel guilty lol XD You prolly felt really good when you finished this poem just because you were ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Kings of the Skies Chapter 1 - Shots Fired

    Chiiiiii!!! (Wait you still go by Chi right? And is that how it's spelled?) Anyway you said this is as bad as it gets. What's so bad with this? Nice ...

    Jul 20, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Young Writers Society is more than a website

    Reader here for a review!! Congrats on the spotlight!! It's always so exciting to be featured on the front. I can tell you love yws. Not just from this essay ...

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 30: The Roof

    Ugh I still have thirteen reviews to catch up on and none of them are green room anymore. :/ I don't know if I can do this. It's just... a ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Alpha: TWG- Chapter 1

    Review day!!! Seems to be the only time I make myself get on here anymore. :( I need motivation to write more reviews and more poems! Got any?? Okay so ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 29: The Facility

    :'( People got here before me :'( I prolly deserve it since I haven't reviewed a chapter since the last review day. But I've been busy out of my mind ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: chapter 28: The Arrow

    Review day!!! Representing the green team!!!! Whohooo!! Wow things are really heating up!!! Am I right???? *Sarcastically* Oh no. Lucian almost died. That would've been fine with ME. Man, is ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 27: The Capitol

    Ok about the chapter cuts, I propose a combination of these two chapters. Yes the story is definitely dragging in these chapters but they're both important. So find a way ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 26: The Invitation

    Next review for this review day! Ugh I still have two chapters after this one. This is kind of a filler chapter. It's great tho!! I loved your new divider ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 25: The Recovery

    Review day!!! :( I wasn't first. *pouts* Now for the review. Why? Why do you make it so hard on me? I'm supposed to give you helpful advice but noooo... ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 24: The Final

    Guess what?? It's review day!! Duh Yay! Omw it's getting so hard to review you're chapters. No cool. Well for me anyway. Haha it's good for you, you're getting to ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 23: The Breakthrough

    Yay review day!!!! Go green! XD Oh my goodness. This is such a beautiful chapter. Just. Wow. Bravo!!! “I don’t get it.” Iris says, squinting while Thea and I chortle. ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Take Me Back

    Hey there!!! Reader here!!! I see you're our newest member. Welcome to the site! Hopefully you'll have tons of fun and get some good feedback on your writing! Your poem ...

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction

    Ki! You wrote on Frozen?!?! My reaction was just like Pheobe's. Like, what?? Yes I am totally obsessed with frozen and I have no idea how I just now read ...

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Teen Fiction Re: Sidewalk Chalk (Chapter Two)

    Happy Review Day!!!!!!!! Reader here to represent team green. Lets get right into the review shall we??? Your character is a sophomore, correct?? She seems really concerned about little tiny ...

    Sep 28, 2014


It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language
— Jane Austen, Northanger Abbey