PaperNessa

I agree with siyasingh. Haikus are generally short, but I would suggest you add more to it... like another haiku to accompany this one.

I agree with Magpie. I don't know if it was intended to sound like a child wrote this but there was little depth of emotion or insight. Kudos for the ...

This was a nice change in juxtaposition with many of the lovey-dovey poems found here. I thought this poem was particularly clever. It was simple and wasn't caked with forced ...

Hello! First off, thank you for reviewing my poem. I figured I should return the favor. I loved the concept of this poem and could easily relate. I don't usually ...

Thank you so much.

Two things: 1) Young Writers Society would not publish the space for me to separate the stanzas, and 2) "tinder" is wood and other dry materials used for making a ...

The narrator is recounting the earlier story from a later date. She has snuck out of her house through an open window. The references to "him" is her lover who ...

Just to clear up the storyline: the chatacter has snuck out of her house through an open window to meet her lover. This is written as though she is looking ...

This was a cool little poem. It was quite short, but I think it's fine that way. The only thing that I would suggest is to make more organized stanzas ...

This was such a cute short story! I loved it so much. The story was a bit cliche, but you wrote it simply and described the scene well. I could ...

haaha i liked this poem a lot (: it sounded like Dr. Seuss!! what does rhyme with purple ? uhmm glurple ? that sounds right. anyways, i enjoyed this. it ...

Three Words: This was interesting. Im not sure if this is what you want to do before you die or if this was written in the point of view of ...

umm, i liked this. it was sweet and sounded nice. only thing: I miss knowing you were only a walk away. i dont think that really made sense. maybe it ...

haaha wow i wasn't expecting the ending but it made sense. I liked the poem. (: good job

Wow i really thought this was great. This deep and meaningful and now im going to start thinking about my dreams whenever i wake up. keep this going, i LOVED ...