PanicAndFlee

I had a hard time getting past the first paragraph. I found it very distracting. You write a little too informally at parts. For example, using the word "guy" repetitively ...

I am in LOVE... With this poem that is. It's not really going to help you with your writing, but hopefully it'll make you more confident! "The box you hide ...

You, the Arsonist The writing exercise in front of the class concerns a pile of leaves depressed and repressed I like your choice of words! stricken from nature and laid ...

I like it, it's very unique! I like your style of writing. Like everyone else said, parts confused me. You spoke of white (which I assume is snow) and frigid ...

By request of posting them...;D Moonlight Decision Let's take a walk on the wild side, And forget all others that crossed the tracks. I love the intro! Totally catches your ...

This was entertaining and confusing all at once! It definitely was not a typical poem. I'm a fan of the sad rhyming and gloomy poetry, but this was a nice ...

The blue bird flies Why does it get to fly Why am I stuck in unhappiness When the world comes crashing down Why can't I fly then Why does the ...

Watch the stars by night time and I promise by the day, Is the word "time" neccessary? This one last kiss I will not miss as the sun shine fades ...

Good poem! I like the style and construction. Some lines sound very typical such as "Making every nerve in my body tingle" and "Like I’m a worthless piece of trash." ...

I love this poem. It speaks to me. There is honestly so much emotion in this, I can just feel it... Especially in the lines "I’m dying to know / ...

Night after lonely night. I stare at the flickering lights Of my computer screen. Very strong intro. It pulled me right in! :] My mind drifts into hollow places Dark, ...

If you fall for this man will you love me? This line seemed kind of out of place in my opinion. Otherwise I liked it alot. It made me feel ...

The last two lines amazed me. I normally don't like very short poems, but this was good. However, I think the 4th line sounds kind of strange. Idiotic just doesn't ...

Ahh, this is great. The lines "we must laugh, and smile, pretending not to feel" really spoke to me. Also, the empty ditch of jealousy is such a vivid image. ...

It was all a bit strange. I think you said "tis" too much, even though you probably did it purposely. This part also sounded odd because you end both lines ...