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Once again Sol, you have blown my mind. I almost got bored with this because it was a cliche valentines. Did I mention I can't stand valentines? No? Well, I ...

Well being my age I've read a lot of books with graphics much more descriptive than this. I have no problem with it and can skip that and go to ...

[s]This is hard to understand. Well, not truly, but I fear it is hard to review on. This peice could be very contridicting. True, there is no momentum or change ...

Wow. This has some serious emotion going on. Now I'm guessing three things. Either your pessimistic (I'm with you), something bad happened and you are not to happy with "life" ...

This was short and powerful. The message is clear and the descritions were great, but if I were writing it I would put more emotion into it. Obviously this is ...

Well generally as a reviewer I try hard to work on storyline and not grmaaer or anything. There were a few of thoes mistakes but I wont focus on thoes. ...

Harsh. I love it. Its a nice change from the usual main ideas most chose to write on. Its bold to say "This country,a place of brotherhood among free men,is ...

This is a little corny,the theme is overused, and I absolutly love it. It's one of thoes "If I can't have you noone can." type things. The word corny is ...

First off I'm not going to say I'm sorry for your loss, or I know how it feels, or even it'll get better. I recently lost someone and I know ...

This was a really great poem. It felt complete, like you botteled all of howsomeone feels into thoes words. That is hard to do. Of course there were a couple ...

Ok. So this poem's basic idea was a little lost to me. I bouldn't grasp onto it. There was not a time when I really got hooked on this poem. ...

Ok. So far this story is good, and it has potential to be great. I really am in love with the idea of best friends falling for each other. I ...

Wow. This was really good. The others pointed out the mistakes so I'm going to give you one piece of constructive criticism. There is not enough! I really liked this ...

I believe this was a really good peice. I've never thought of it from that point of view. Although my family has an abusive and drunken background, I would not ...

I really like this. There were parts were it could be better, but it was a goo beginning. The idea may be cliche, but life is cliche. Nothing ever happens ...