PancakeandWaffle

Hi Cassie this is the ever mysterious Pancake! I just wanted to say that this was really nice, I liked it a lot in fact I'd love to see more ...

Hello! Waffle here to review your poem :D This poem is difficult to follow. Starting with the first line, One day in a bright and sunny day I'm a little ...

Shi! Welcome to Young Writers Society :D So I'll just review now, umm.. To start off, the title is very intriguing, and I think that it fits the work. I ...

Amazing! Clearly you know some great vocabulary. It is pretty gothic, but it does sound really good. One part where I feel you may have messed up: "It mitilates and ...

Thank you for writing this. I agree with most of what you said, and it's always good when I can tell the writer is passionate about what they are writing, ...

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Hello. Coming from a home where my parents are always fighting, this was near to my heart. The worst bit is that my parents are staying together for their kids, ...

Hello! I am so freaking in love with this thing omg. It's just so flippin amazeballs. I see... NOTHING WRONG WITH IT! Oh my goodness, I'm really hyper right now, ...

Hello Remington. This is a very emotional story, and it really has me pretty moved... Let's get into the review. I really don't like this layout. It's not a story, ...

Hey! This is pretty moving. I'm a Christian, I'm straight, I'm against LGBT+, but that doesn't mean you mean any less to me than any other human being that is ...

Hello, Waffle here to drop a review. This poem started out okay, and then you totally lost me. The rhythm just fell apart. When you are transitioning ages, add an ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS, you'll find it's the best online writing community that exists :D I really love this poem. It's got an amazing flow, good spacing, and you did ...

Amazing! I don't want to repeat what the other reviewers said, but for sure work on what SilverBerry and KeepWriting mentioned. The fact that Emmeline is a prominent character hits ...

Hello. So, I believe I have been summoned? Let's review a thing! :D Is your dog okay? I don't get it. I guess your grandpa gave your dog a thyroid ...

Hey! Waffle here for a review. I don't think this is really meant for the poem section. This is meant for short stories (if you can make it into one,) ...