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Hi, Lu! It's been a while, hasn't it? Anyways, I'm here to give you feedback. It's well written as always, your grammar is great, and I adore your style. It ...

Hi, here to review! First off, I really like where this is headed, and I love the new take on zombies-- but try to describe them better. Are they intellectual, ...

All I can say is: Wow. Seriously, this is how I feel one hundred percent of the time.. I love the format of the poem: the positive, the negative, the ...

I think that this one a bit odd, but it was still good. I liked the main concept of the piece, but after skimming the other reviews, I don't think ...

Pen here with a review~ This is beautifully written, honestly. I see no problems with the poem, and the repetitiveness makes it almost seem like a song. This is so ...

Pen here to review! You did a great job with the descriptions, and even though your descriptions weren't exactly what I imagined for the Gods, they were amazing. I love ...

Pen here with a revieeeew~ This is literally perfect. It's great! And I love how ironic it is, yano? I love your use of literary devices as you mentioned them. ...

It's good, but the A/Ns confused me, try separating them a bit more? Italicize them, or whatever. Also, another thing is that it's sooo short. Try being more descriptive, and ...

Hi! Pen here with a review! To start things off (and break the ice) Welcome to YWS! I hope you find joy and happiness in the form of our little ...

Pencil here with your review! Hullo Lu! Let me just tell you. This is great. It gets better and better. It's addicting, almost. There were little to no mistakes, and ...

Pen has a Christmas Review for youuu~ Here we go~ *super junior plays* Mein Gott. It's got a certain kind of sadness. It starts out joyful, and these kids are ...

Pen here, with a Jolly Review!! First off, I'd like to say that this is absolutely adorable! It's well written, with just the right touches of humor and joy and.. ...

Pen here, with a review! First off, it's gotten better! I actually found myself unable to loom away. This chapter explains much more than the last, and I adore the ...

Pen here with a review! First, to start things off, it's a great story. It's got a good plot (so far) and there's traces of humor and a small hint ...

Hiya! Pen to the review rescue! My review is probably the same as the last two, but I honestly love this story more than ever. I like the process of ...