Pacific_Sky14

THANK youuuuu guys! :]

EEEk! I was editing this poem and I changed it so much. I don't know if it sounded better the other way. Please tell me! :!: :? ~Skyy.

Ok, thankyou! :] It's about different people around me. Not just one person. It's to reach out to anyone. :)

Wow, that is so good! The story is very moving and understanding! ~Skyy.

This is a sweet poem! It sounds incomplete but the chorus and first verse are great!!! Keep writing 'cause this song can use some more of your talented mind. I ...

Ya know, that's what happens to me! I hate it when the happens...another hour of waiting..errgh ~Skyy.

You're very welcome! :) and talented, keep on writing!

You are very welcome, :)

I agree with Durrie! :) Two what? I don't really know haiku's, but it's alright!!^>^

Wow, this is very good! ^.^ I liked the chorus. you should definitely keep on writing lyrics!!

Nice imagery. I like the chorus. This is cool. :)

I felt like I needed to submit a funny piece...and I don't think it is really funny, Ha! :) I just looked outside and saw that ball of sunshine and ...

Wow, Kamas that was really something. That is pretty good for just an expirement! I don't know what half those words mean...but sounds like you used them right... ^.^ I ...

thx :P

Wow, that is very good. I didn't find anything wrong with this, but Hey, that's just on me. Nice job you did. :)