This song is dedicated to my best friend.
I've never stopped loving you...
You're My Everything
My jealousy is plain to see
You're standing right in front of me
But I can't be with you cause'...
You're with that other girl
Yeah-- that other girl
[Chorus]
You're the one I want to hold
You're the one I dream about
I tell you all my secrets
You're the one I'd never doubt
To be with you, I'd give anything
Yeah-- it's true...whoa!
You're my every--thing
[end Chorus]
Like a summer night that fades away
It waits to arise a brand new day
You slipped right through my fingers
All I'm asking for is one chance
Won't you give me a second glance?
When you're in trouble,
You come to me
When you're worn and lost,
You come find me
Baby-- why can't you see?
[Chorus]
That you're the one I want to hold
You're the one I dream about
I tell you all my secrets
You're the one I'd never doubt
To be with you, I'd give anything
Whoa-- it's true...yeah--!
You're my every--thing
[end Chorus]
You're my best friend
Whatever it may take
For you, I'd bend
Loving you, I can't fake
You're the one I dream about
You tell me all your secrets
You're the one I can't live without
My jealousy is plain to see
I need you here in front of me
I'd do anything!
Yeah--
Yeah-- [whoa!]
You're my every--thing
Yeah, my everything
My everything
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These are my two most favourite verses from the song.
It was so heartfelt, so emotional, personal.
Could you PM me if you write something new? I totaly love your work
Loved this verse.
Overall I thought it was really nice and heartfelt and I liked the lyrics. The only problem I had was I couldn't hear the song in my head at all. It had pretty good rhythm and everything but I just couldn't hear it, but if you can, awesome.
Nice job overall though
-Carly
Thanks to everyone who have replied
TripleTravelTales,
I cannot send you a private message because you've disabled that feature. If you allow it, than I'll surely let you in on some songwriting tips
-thevoiceinside
Man! This is wonderful! I can't believe you have such a talent! I could never write lyrics like this! It's perfect just the way it is! I always need an idea to write good lyrics! P.M. me!
Great Work,
Triple Travel Tales
I hope to write lyrics like yours one day! I need comments on my 3rd part of my story in Adventure Fiction. Please comment! I'm trying to promote it! I only got one on it!
GTG!
TTT---again
wow. i'm... speachless. I'm in awe. I'm jealous of ur serious talent. wow
Wow, thank you so much everyone
I wrote this at 4 a.m. this morning. I couldn't sleep. I was with my best friend (the guy in this song) till about 2 a.m. The only problem is, his girlfriend was with us too. She's a friend of mine but I've known this guy for 6 years. And yes, I wrote this from my point of view. It's like I'm singing it to him (my best friend).
Hey! I really like the song but it seems a bit choppy in parts. Smooth it up a bit and it'll be perfect. I do love it though. The chorus is so good! I would download it onto my MP3 player for sure. :)
<3 Chrissie
Wow, this is very good! ^.^ I liked the chorus. you should definitely keep on writing lyrics!!
I REALLY like this! You've got definite talent!!! It's so true!!! But is this a girl singing it to a guy? I was wondering.
