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Please don't double post, people will review as they review. If you want reviews sooner, got to the Will Review For Food thread. Not to mention, this is pretty long, ...

Where is your punctuation darling? Thus far I see none, at all. That is not a good sign. This is one beyond a runon sentence at this point. Please please ...

I am not sure how I feel about this, it's very...bland? When you are talking about something like War, you could have some really good description, here you just say ...

I love that the character stays consistent, his voice stays the same throughout the whole piece. The ending was a bit shocking at first, but the more I thought about ...

Never did I think it possible, To feel the way I do, I cry myself to sleep at night, All because of you. Weak first stanza, I am stuck with ...

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Funny? Yes. But I have to agree with Squall on this one, as funny as this is, it does not count as poetry. It's a long listed rant about why ...

Short poetry is not bad poetry, but neither of these are particularly good. There is little emotion, no imaginary, and nothing real to grasp here. Give me more, I want ...

I am actually not a fan of this poem, it's line after line navel gazing and to be honest by the end the only thoughts going through my mind were, ...

Hi! I feel like you are bringing me in at the end of the story here, there is no build up, you start with what sounds like it should be ...

Ahh ok the first thing that I noticed is that you basically threw a list of questions and half formed ideas at us and called it a poem. The ideas ...

The first thing I would like to say is that the caps are adding nothing, and distracting from everything. Remove them if you want anyone to take this seriously. The ...

Three words, dearie. Show don't tell. Also the "lord oh lord" lines became a bit much for me, and this line "The saddens and theft," was hard to read and ...

Hi I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything of your own on here. That way everyone gets a little feedback. ...

Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...