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  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: A letter to the ones I left behind.

    Hello there! Here to review your work on this fine review day! I'm by no means a poet so I can't really help you with the technical side of things. ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Satire Re: Skyline | Chapter One

    Hello! Here to review your work on this fine review day! I will review as I read so that it will make much more sense to both you and me. ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: because we are all lemmings

    Hi fellow team member! I'm going through all of our team now and offering my opinions on their work. (WE'RE DOING SO WELL BY THE WAY!) First of all - ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Other » Other, General Re: A Backwards World

    Hello there! Here to review your piece of work for this fine review day! This actually really interested me! It reminds me of something that I have just written on ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Human Nature

    Hello there! Here to review your work for this fine review day! I will review as I read so that it will make a lot more sense for both me ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Corner Store Regular

    Hello there! Here to review your work right after Blackwood :) HAPPY REVIEW DAY by the way :) I really like this! By no means am I a poet so ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: The Arc: Prologue

    Hello there! Here to review your work for review day! I'm just going through the many team members of the inc[red]ibles and offering my opinions. I noticed that this was ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: Because I Smile

    GOOD AFTERNOON! Here to review your lyrical work for this fine review day! I'm not a poet by any means so I can't really help with the technical side of ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: BFF (Boy Friends Forever) Chapter 1

    Hello! Here to review your work on this fine Review Day! I really loved this chapter! I haven't another piece of writing on this site where someone has tried to ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter One, Part Two

    Hello there! Here to review your work this fine Review Day. I will review as I read so that I makes a lot more sense to both me and you. ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a letter to charles

    Hello fellow team member! Here to look at this piece like you suggested. I will review as I read so that it makes much more sense to both me and ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Culture, Horror Re: Qualm Meadow Chapter 15 (tidbit)

    Me again - Just having another nosey at some of your writing as I enjoyed Junior so much. "They were not human, they were not creature, they were shadows and ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Qualm Meadow Chapter 16 (tidbit)

    GOOD AFTERNOON! Here to review your work on this fine review day. I will review as I read so that it makes much more sense to both me and you. ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Rings of Rhea - Part 1.4

    Hello! Here to review your piece of work for review day! I will review as I read so that it will make much more sense for both me and you. ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Finding Home

    GOOD AFTERNOON! Here to review your work for review day. I will review as I read so that it makes a little more sense to both me and you. I ...

    Jul 28, 2013


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