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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Another Knight's Tale Chapter 1

    Hi There! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your chapter for this fine review day! I saw that you asked for it to be reviewed ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Sun Children V - The Princess' Crown - Prologue - Draft 1

    Hi There! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your chapter for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I can get ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: New Found Freedom!

    Hi Shiksha! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your chapter for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I can get ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Prologue

    Hi Amethyst! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your chapter for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I can get ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Biting Game: Alice's Story.

    Hi Hightop! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your chapter for this fine review day! And of course I would do anything for a fellow ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Joke's on You

    Hi Maggie! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your chapter for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I can get ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: If it is possible to erase our memories, will I still fall in love with her all over again?

    Hi Evanlam! Here to review your short story for review day! I am proudly representing the Green Lanterns Team! I will review as I read so that it makes a ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Faking Perfect

    Hi ChangeTheWorld! You're doing so amazingly well for your first review day so I'm here to offer my thoughts on the piece of work that you posted in the forum! ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One

    Hi SlushySlapped! I'm back to review chapter one! Again, I will review as I read to make this easier to read. “Noelle wasn’t like me. She was always spouting off ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue

    Hi SlushySlapped! Here to review your two pieces as requested in the forum! Representing the gorgeous green lanterns of course! I will review as I read to make this all ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Back Of Your Eyelids - Chapter Three

    Me again! Back to review chapter 3 for review day :) “His fork hit the bowl with a clatter, his nostrils flaring. “Fuck you!” - I think this bowl could ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Back Of Your Eyelids - Chapter Two

    Me again! Back to review chapter 2 for review day :) “Abraham looked at Cole, who stood by the counter in his usual black tank top and nylon shorts. The ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Back Of Your Eyelids - Chapter One

    Good evening! I'm a member of the green lanterns and I'm here to review your chapters this fine review day! I will review as I read so that it makes ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Slenderman: Origins - Part Two

    Me again, here to review chapter two on behalf of the gorgeous green lanterns! Once again, I will review as I read to make this go a little smoother. Here ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: Slenderman: Origins - Part One

    Hello Lukacena! Here to review your chapters on this fine review day. I'm representing all of those gorgeous green lanterns out there! I will review as I read so that ...

    Aug 25, 2013


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