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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: taught me how to breathe

    Hi, Hex! Okay, so I find it harder to review things I like, for some reason. So I may struggle a bit here, especially since I'm pretty new to poetry ...

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Crowd

    Hi, Joy! Now, I'm pretty new to poetry, and I haven't reviewed anything in a very long time, so forgive me in advance if I'm a little rusty! Now, the ...

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Guardian Angel (part one)

    Hey! Welcome to YWS! My dad and I moved from town to town, usually staying in a hotel until we leave the town as we always did, looking for a ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Shattered Gateway.

    Hi! Sitting on the bed, the board rough against my fingers, my fingernails caked with the blood of my little sister, I raise my hand, resting my eyes on it, ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Prologue

    Hey! This is a pretty dark prologue, you have to love novels that start with witch burnings. “Fait ardre la chaitif jus a sa dernier alaine!” screamed one of the ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Hush-hush truth about my Blues

    Hey DiannePan. First of all- thank you for sharing with everyone, it's insightful and something that I, at least, can relate entirely. While I hope and wish to make some ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Snakes Of Cursed Gold chapter 1 Airlia

    Hey Kiaya I was crouching low in the forest behind a massive; rugged rock. The semicolon here should be a comma. Semicolons are typically used as a sort of conjunction ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Words on my Skin

    Hey! First of all, I would like to say that while I didn't really enjoy this- it's hard to enjoy something about such a sad topic- I did empathize with ...

    Jan 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Kiwi summer

    Well. I don't critique poetry, or read it, or anything, so I won't be much help- but this made me smile. Possibly because I'm a kiwi too. XD The only ...

    Jan 20, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I know you.

    Hey, welcome to YWS! I don't know fate works, but I do know it likes to be funny. As first lines go, this one is kind of...okay. It doesn't really ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Letter to Pedantic Americans

    Hehehehe. Americans just don't know how to spell. /joking I like our extra vowels, though I find myself double guessing myself when faced with american spellchecks.... like the site used ...

    Oct 21, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Annie

    Hey Elinor ^_^ Thomas Pike placed a single red rose on top of the mounds of others which surrounded Annie Ryan’s coffin, a piece of crumpled paper in his hand. ...

    Sep 5, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Books made into movies?

    Hey, Ktg! ^_^ I read a lot of books. Most of them I like. Sometimes they are made into movies. And sometimes, it seems like the movies ruin the book. ...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The flowers of dispair

    Hey Gillian! I knew instantly that I wanted to find out where they came from, being a private investigator, This insterests me, from what I can tell private investigators are ...

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Desertion, Existence, Beginnings, and Redemption

    Okay, I'm sorry, but I was put off at the very first line. I run through the depraved darkness that the bastard night cast upon the world. What is 'depraved ...

    Sep 2, 2010


And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains.
— Percy Bysshe Shelley