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Re: taught me how to breathe
Hi, Hex! Okay, so I find it harder to review things I like, for some reason. So I may struggle a bit here, especially since I'm pretty new to poetry ...
Mar 12, 2017 -
Re: Crowd
Hi, Joy! Now, I'm pretty new to poetry, and I haven't reviewed anything in a very long time, so forgive me in advance if I'm a little rusty! Now, the ...
Mar 12, 2017 -
Re: Guardian Angel (part one)
Hey! Welcome to YWS! My dad and I moved from town to town, usually staying in a hotel until we leave the town as we always did, looking for a ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Shattered Gateway.
Hi! Sitting on the bed, the board rough against my fingers, my fingernails caked with the blood of my little sister, I raise my hand, resting my eyes on it, ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Prologue
Hey! This is a pretty dark prologue, you have to love novels that start with witch burnings. “Fait ardre la chaitif jus a sa dernier alaine!” screamed one of the ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Hush-hush truth about my Blues
Hey DiannePan. First of all- thank you for sharing with everyone, it's insightful and something that I, at least, can relate entirely. While I hope and wish to make some ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Snakes Of Cursed Gold chapter 1 Airlia
Hey Kiaya I was crouching low in the forest behind a massive; rugged rock. The semicolon here should be a comma. Semicolons are typically used as a sort of conjunction ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: The Words on my Skin
Hey! First of all, I would like to say that while I didn't really enjoy this- it's hard to enjoy something about such a sad topic- I did empathize with ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: A Kiwi summer
Well. I don't critique poetry, or read it, or anything, so I won't be much help- but this made me smile. Possibly because I'm a kiwi too. XD The only ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: I know you.
Hey, welcome to YWS! I don't know fate works, but I do know it likes to be funny. As first lines go, this one is kind of...okay. It doesn't really ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: A Letter to Pedantic Americans
Hehehehe. Americans just don't know how to spell. /joking I like our extra vowels, though I find myself double guessing myself when faced with american spellchecks.... like the site used ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Annie
Hey Elinor ^_^ Thomas Pike placed a single red rose on top of the mounds of others which surrounded Annie Ryan’s coffin, a piece of crumpled paper in his hand. ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Books made into movies?
Hey, Ktg! ^_^ I read a lot of books. Most of them I like. Sometimes they are made into movies. And sometimes, it seems like the movies ruin the book. ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: The flowers of dispair
Hey Gillian! I knew instantly that I wanted to find out where they came from, being a private investigator, This insterests me, from what I can tell private investigators are ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Desertion, Existence, Beginnings, and Redemption
Okay, I'm sorry, but I was put off at the very first line. I run through the depraved darkness that the bastard night cast upon the world. What is 'depraved ...
Sep 2, 2010
