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This is is a really good piece... This is so STARK and REAL. I can't help but commend you on the way you let Emily's emotions flow out like that! ...

This chapter speaks about suicide, and the emotions that it contains, and the events, the reasonings, the rationalization, the victom's state of mental health and physical control. This is a ...

This sounds a whole lot like a manga's plot to me! There are a whole bunch of twists and turns in this plot line that I really like. The whole ...

Wonderful! I completely understand what you're getting at! They do nothing! That government of ours do nothing except for a few pitiful attempts to right the wrongs by setting up ...

This is one story I actually WANT to read. No offence to the others but your writing has so much attitude, it's impossible not to like it! The main character's ...

Hey, aqua here! Now this made a bit more sense than the Prelude! I liked it a lot more too. And it's a bit less confusing than before! (lol, I ...

I personally thought this piece was quite good, the flow of events and the short but informative descriptions. But I thought your piece was...missing something. An atmosphere really. The story ...

Crazy perfect! With just six lines, you gave us so much information that could keep us thinking for hours! But one thing you need to consider is your length. Even ...

Hey, Kat! I can tell, this review will be short. 1. You know, how much of a romantic I am, so I was simply amazed by this. How you strung ...

Hey, aqua here. And welcome to YWS! 1. I'm going to start off by saying this is written extremely well. But to tell you the truth, I think this would ...

The story surprised me with the depth it showed me. You can really tell about the MC's dreams and hopes and aspirations and how that all flew away when she ...

I think you should continue. This really intrigued me and made me wonder exactly what the MC's situation was. And nice work on the descriptions. Absolutely Perfect. * thumbs up*

Hi Ri! This really amazing! I love the emotions that he's conveying in this chapter and it FEELS SO REAL!! I don't think I have anything bad to say about ...

Wow. Just wow. This is incredible! But I never expected less! 1. I love the tension in the first paragraph that just sets you on edge!But one thing I want ...

Hello! 1. The reason this caught my eye was because of my love for anything romantic. When you write about love, do you get an overwhelming feeling to prove to ...