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In the dream, she’s young again and so is he. She’s standing in the meadow that he lives in front of. It’s been a year since her mom passed away and she’s reluctant to be moving away from her home, her life, and her love. All she feels is loneliness, sadness, and heartache. Then, his voice reaches her.
"Steph? Is that you?" the boy's short, cropped blonde hair glistened in the moonless night and tears started to form in his gray eyes.
Well, that's an intriguing start there...it starts out by stating this is very much a dream which in itself gets your attention because that is a bit of an unusual starting point there but then it also continues on to discuss what appears to have been a bit of a tragic event in this girl's life here and how she's dealing with moving away from it all, and then of course we've got the voice of someone that I assume is rather important just cutting right through there...all in all, certainly makes you ask a few question here...this one.
"Knight," the girl's long, straight black hair blew in sync with the breeze that floated around the meadow and her green eyes squinted as the boy came into view.
"Steph, please don't leave," he took her hands in his and paused to pick a rose from the few that were growing all around them.
Hmm, I'm loving this rather slow feel you get while the two of them pause for the conversation here, just kind of saying each other's names. In that one word of dialogue you can quite clearly the depth of their relationship expressed by how they seem to be telling each other entire stories in that one word...its really feels like one of the slow motion zoom in shots in a movie there in the middle, very simple but powerful pair of greetings there.
"I wish I could stay but remember Knight, I'll see you again, and then we can get married and you'll make me the happiest girl in the world, I promise, do you promise too Knight?" she smiled.
"I do, I promise I'll find you Steph, I love you, now go. I'll be here waiting for you," he let go and stepped back into the mist that had started to form.
"I'm only moving a state away," she paused "Knight?" but he was no longer there.
Hmmm...and a powerful ending there, we get that little tidbit of information that these are two people just about to be married, which certainly hits home quite well and then it ends on the declaration that things will go on, but of course the dream seems to vanish at this point into the mist....and I can't help but think if this is some form of foreshadowing here. All in all, a powerful end to a really solid prologue here. This seems like something that I'd certainly continue to read from here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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