Noelle

Hi there! Sometimes I’ll be standing somewhere and realise that everyone around me will be dead one day. I really like this opening line. It's so simple, but so powerful ...

Hi there! I finally got here! I was actually in the process of reading chapter 6 when I realized it hadn't read this one yet :O Good thing I remembered. ...

Hi there! Vegetable patches line my way on both sides of the cobbled path, my father's pride and joy. I found this funny and very interesting. Usually it's the mother ...

Hi there! Once again, you have not disappointed with this chapter. It was action packed but didn't lack plot and information. I give you props. Nice job. The first thing ...

Hi there! So I read the prologue to this before and I was really excited to read more. You didn't disappoint. This I s a good chapter. I really enjoy ...

Hi there! Oh gosh, I love this chapter, I really do. It started out a little slow, just him trying to escape his "destiny" or whatever his fake parents were ...

Hi there! Alright, let's start out with your opening line. Vaguely but certainly do I remember the first night he visited me. This is a bit confusing to me. These ...

Hi there! So it took me a really long time to get through this. Not necessarily 'cause it was so long, but because I was so busy this past week. ...

Hi there! So glad that I finally got around to this. This is a really good prologue. I was drawn in from the beginning and couldn't stop reading. Very nice. ...

Hi there! My name is Sparta and I've killed people. *good opening line. It really draws in the reader and gives them a good idea of what the story is ...

Hi there! Welcome to the site! Alright, this could use some work. I'm here to help you make this the best it can be! :) First off, I'm assuming that ...

Hi there! So I'm really impressed with this chapter! It's written well and it's a great continuation of the story. The story is going well and I like the introduction ...

Hi there Myst. Guess what??? This is my 500th review!!!!!! :D Just had to share that. Anyway... I really like this chapter. It's a good continuation of the story. It's ...

Hi there! Welcome to the site! :-) You have completely and totally grabbed my attention. These are the kind of novels that I like to read. The idea of these ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Finally got around to this. Sorry for the wait. "Pour me another one," I said weakly, as the last drops of whiskey ...