Noelle

Hi there! I don't believe that you were writing this while falling asleep! Okay, well, I believe you, but it doesn't seem like it. It's actually written very well and ...

Hi there! The first thing I noticed while reading through is that you have a lot of commas in your sentences, ones that are in the wrong place. You can ...

Hi there! The floors were made of beige tiles, but mostly they were made of people’s feet, walking in every direction. I totally understand what kind of image you were ...

Hi there! I was just about to say something about how we haven't really heard anything about Lekan having to leave lately. I feel like he was trying to forget ...

Hi there! Why you do this to me??!! My feels, they're all broken! And it's only the third chapter! D': See, now this was an emotional goodbye, even if it ...

Hi there! For example, after a sentence to his mother, Sinclair looked over to Drew and grinned. “Brother of mine, I’m afraid you are missing our father’s point. You see,” ...

Hi there! Again, I don't have much to say. Your chapters are always short, which is fine really because the story is moving along very well, and there's barely anything ...

Hi there! Viper dropped the plate, letting it clatter onto the low table next to him and moved to Nikki quickly. I'm not sure how I feel about this description. ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! Just a general flyby here (where I basically just tell you what your poem meant to me and what I got out ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! About time I got back to this. Sorry for the long break between reviews. Life and all that, ya know? No… ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This'll be a nice, short review as I really don't have much to say. Okay, there's been one thing that I've ...

Hi there! So now Obi has a secret past as well. I love it! The flashback really adds to the dynamic of the story. Now there's another layer that we ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I really like how we're continuing to learn things about Tammy and her past. I know that it's just the third ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! So, with this opening scene, I got the idea that she and Freddie were the only two in the room. Then ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Oooh, I love how we see Rease's insecurities right off the bat. This is quite an emotional story and it's important ...