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Re: Dual Identity - Prologue
Hi there! I was immediately pulled in by the title. When I look for books to read, I notice titles first. If I saw this book on the shelves at ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 2 (Part 1)
Hi there! I read this back when you first posted it, but then school started picking up and I got lazy. So I'm back now to check it out! And ...
Dec 27, 2014 -
Re: Hadley pt 1
Hi there! You said "feel free to destroy this" and I might just take you up on that :3 I ran my fingers through my blonde hair and running downstairs. ...
Dec 27, 2014 -
Re: "Broken" Prologue
Hi there! I read this a while ago and totally meant to review it, but I forgot >< Story of my life. Anyways, I'm here now! At first, it felt ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Intertwined Fates
Hi there! I'm not really a big fan of fanfiction, I'll be honest. The only kind I really like is Hunger Games fanfiction because that's usually people telling stories of ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Our Pulse
Hi there! It took me a little while to get this done, because well, poetry is still a bit confusing to me so I wanted to make sure I did ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 31
Hi there! Oh noes, the chapters keep piling up! I'll have to catch up quick. I can't stand not reaching the end when everyone else does! Let's get to it. ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.4 Girl
Hi there! Omgness, timmy. There's no way I can review this. Seriously, it's great. You captured the girl's emotions perfectly and really show us how terrified she is. At the ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 4.2
Hi there! So, this is a tiny thing, but I don't think you really gave us a time frame in this chapter. Maybe you mentioned what time of day it ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 10: Tears Dry On Their Own
Hi there! ‘Do you want me to answer that?... I didn’t think so.’ I would've liked to see this expanded upon. This is a great opportunity for us to see ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 3.1
Hi there! Right outside the dirt yard is the large park and pond. Or more commonly known as the only place in the entire village where grass grows. Hm... something ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 2
Hi there! I knew there was something I hadn't been reviewing... ^_^ No worries, I'm here now. Let's do this, shall we? Oh, also please forgive any of my ignorance ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 33.
Hi there! So you know already that I've read all of the other chapters. If anything from those chapters sneak into my review I apologize. This is going to be ...
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 12
Hi there! I know it's been super long since I reviewed this and I'm sorry. I'm still following this novel, it's just taking me oh so long to get here. ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 17
Hi there! Obi smiled as Lekan cursed, leaning against the wall as he watched his nephew pace angrily. This sentence seems a big jumbled to me. I understand what you're ...
Dec 2, 2014
