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Noelle

if we didn't have words to read, write, and speak, I think I would die

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Prologue

    Hi there! I was immediately pulled in by the title. When I look for books to read, I notice titles first. If I saw this book on the shelves at ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 2 (Part 1)

    Hi there! I read this back when you first posted it, but then school started picking up and I got lazy. So I'm back now to check it out! And ...

    Dec 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Hadley pt 1

    Hi there! You said "feel free to destroy this" and I might just take you up on that :3 I ran my fingers through my blonde hair and running downstairs. ...

    Dec 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: "Broken" Prologue

    Hi there! I read this a while ago and totally meant to review it, but I forgot >< Story of my life. Anyways, I'm here now! At first, it felt ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Intertwined Fates

    Hi there! I'm not really a big fan of fanfiction, I'll be honest. The only kind I really like is Hunger Games fanfiction because that's usually people telling stories of ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our Pulse

    Hi there! It took me a little while to get this done, because well, poetry is still a bit confusing to me so I wanted to make sure I did ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 31

    Hi there! Oh noes, the chapters keep piling up! I'll have to catch up quick. I can't stand not reaching the end when everyone else does! Let's get to it. ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 3.4 Girl

    Hi there! Omgness, timmy. There's no way I can review this. Seriously, it's great. You captured the girl's emotions perfectly and really show us how terrified she is. At the ...

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 4.2

    Hi there! So, this is a tiny thing, but I don't think you really gave us a time frame in this chapter. Maybe you mentioned what time of day it ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 10: Tears Dry On Their Own

    Hi there! ‘Do you want me to answer that?... I didn’t think so.’ I would've liked to see this expanded upon. This is a great opportunity for us to see ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 3.1

    Hi there! Right outside the dirt yard is the large park and pond. Or more commonly known as the only place in the entire village where grass grows. Hm... something ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 2

    Hi there! I knew there was something I hadn't been reviewing... ^_^ No worries, I'm here now. Let's do this, shall we? Oh, also please forgive any of my ignorance ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 33.

    Hi there! So you know already that I've read all of the other chapters. If anything from those chapters sneak into my review I apologize. This is going to be ...

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 12

    Hi there! I know it's been super long since I reviewed this and I'm sorry. I'm still following this novel, it's just taking me oh so long to get here. ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 17

    Hi there! Obi smiled as Lekan cursed, leaning against the wall as he watched his nephew pace angrily. This sentence seems a big jumbled to me. I understand what you're ...

    Dec 2, 2014


Patience is the strength of the weak, impatience is the weakness of the strong.
— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher