Noelle

Hi there! This is a really good poem. I like the title. :) Very creative. You imagery is great and I can imagine everything you're saying. The rhyme scheme is ...

Hi there! This is a great poem, I really enjoyed reading it! You did a great job. I understand what you're trying to say and I think you did a ...

Hi there! This was a really good poem. I like the structure, how you made the text centered. It's very original. Your spelling and grammer is good, so no worries ...

Hi there! When I first looked at this, I was wondering how you made it work. It looked very long and the lines seemed to be too long to accomplish ...

Hi there! This was a good read. I could tell you put a lot of thought into it. There is a lot of emotion in this. I like the way ...

Hi there! Wow...this is really good! I enjoyed it very much. There's great imagery. It's written very well; your grammer and spelling are perfect. It flows really well too. There's ...

Hi there! This is a very good peom. I like the way you break up each line. It's very original and I've never seen a poem written like that. Your ...

Hi there! I'm here to review, as requested. Wow...this was really great! You started off great, introducing one of the flaws Noor sees in herself and then following it up ...

Hi there! our look alike s You forgot the 's' on the end of 'alikes'. Not a big deal, but I figured I'd point it out. My speech - my ...

Hi there! This poem is great! I honestly couldn't find anything to correct so I'm going to tell you what I liked about it. My comments are in red . ...

Hi there! This is a very good piece. I enjoyed it. You did a good job with your imagery and such. Your grammer and spelling is good so no worries ...

Hi there! This was a very interesting story. I like the premise and the main character is great. Your dialouge was solid and I quite enjoyed reading it. It made ...

Hi there! First off I just want to say that this was very good, amazing even. It was well written and captivating. I didn't want to stop reading! I like ...

Hi there! This was a good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your grammer and spelling are good so no worries there. It flows well and the flow only falters once: ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. I really enjoyed reading this. I went and read the first chapter too and you did a great job continuing the story. ...